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    • In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
  • Why might this be the case?
    • Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
    • It is true that in many countries, the majority of individuals prefer to buy property for themselves rather than rent it.
    • In my opinion, there are many reasons why some people tend to purchase houses and this tendency can bring many merits for themselves.
    • On the one hand, there are two obvious benefits that explain why many people tend to buy accommodations instead of renting houses in several countries.
    • First and foremost, several state-owned banks offer appropriate situations for people who decide to become homeowners.
    • In other words, the banks in these nations provide a remarkable amount of money in the form of subsidized loans with a long repayment period, especially for young couples who have some deposits in their accounts.
    • Last but not least, the purchase of a home is seen as a valuable long investment for some part of society that is attempting to have a bright future.
  • Simply put, when one has private property becomes retired who may better manage his living expenses either rent or sell them.
    • In my view, becoming a homeowner brings many merits especially for young couples.
  • First of all, a number of landlords tend to set stricter rules for their tenants.
  • In other words, tenants are not allowed to modify the decorations of their units, such as painting, repairing, and even changing certain things in the accommodation to make it attractive.
    • Indeed, if they change some part of their units, they may be reprimanded by landlords.
    • Secondly, in multiple nations, tenants suffer a multitude of difficulties when property-owners decide to rise in rent.
    • In fact, some occupants need to work hard to prepare the amount of money demanded by landlords as rent.
    • Therefore, receiving debt or saving money to purchase a personal house is a procedure that suits them.
  • In conclusion, my viewpoint is that buying private houses or apartments not only consider as financial support for many people but also frees them from difficult rules and heavy rent payments.

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    • It is true that in many countries, the majority of individuals prefer to buy property for themselves rather than rent it.
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    • It is true that in many countries, the majority of individuals prefer to buy property for themselves rather than rent it.
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    • In my opinion, there are many reasons why some people tend to purchase houses and this tendency can bring many merits for themselves.
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    • In my opinion, there are many good reasons why some people tendprefer to purchase houses and this tendency can bring many merits for themselves.
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    • On the one hand, there are two obvious benefits that explain why many people tend to buy accommodations instead of renting houses in several countries.
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    • On the one hand, tThere are two obvious benefits that explain why many people tend to buy accommodations instead of renting houses in severalo purchasing, rather than renting, accommodations in certain countries.
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    • First and foremost, several state-owned banks offer appropriate situations for people who decide to become homeowners.
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    • First and foremost, several state-owned banks offer appropriate situations for people who decittractive lending terms for borrowing the funds needed to become homeownersmake a purchaase.
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    • In other words, the banks in these nations provide a remarkable amount of money in the form of subsidized loans with a long repayment period, especially for young couples who have some deposits in their accounts.
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    • In other words, the banks in these nations provide a remarkable amount of moneyfunding (financing) in the form of subsidized loans with a long repayment period,s; this is especially forattractive to young couplebuyers who have some deposits in their accountsn't large amounts of cash on hand.
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    • Last but not least, the purchase of a home is seen as a valuable long investment for some part of society that is attempting to have a bright future.
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    • Last but not leastSecond, the purchase of a home is seen as a valuable long-term investment for some part of society that is attempting to have a brightthe future.
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    • Simply put, when one has private property becomes retired who may better manage his living expenses either rent or sell them.
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    • In other words, tenants are not allowed to modify the decorations of their units, such as painting, repairing, and even changing certain things in the accommodation to make it attractive.
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    • Secondly, in multiple nations, tenants suffer a multitude of difficulties when property-owners decide to rise in rent.
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    • Secondly, in multiple nations, tenants suffer a multitude of difficulties, tenants in many nations suffer financial hardship when property-owners decide to raise in rents.
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    • Therefore, receiving debt or saving money to purchase a personal house is a procedure that suits them.
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    • Therefore, receiving debt or saving money to purchase a personal house is a procedure thasaving money for the eventual purchase of a private property best suits them.
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    • In conclusion, my viewpoint is that buying private houses or apartments not only consider as financial support for many people but also frees them from difficult rules and heavy rent payments.
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