Korekty

Text from Maryam1987 - English

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    • In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
  • Why might this be the case?
    • Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
    • It is true that in many countries, the majority of individuals prefer to buy property for themselves rather than rent it.
    • In my opinion, there are many reasons why some people tend to purchase houses and this tendency can bring many merits for themselves.
    • On the one hand, there are two obvious benefits that explain why many people tend to buy accommodations instead of renting houses in several countries.
    • First and foremost, several state-owned banks offer appropriate situations for people who decide to become homeowners.
    • In other words, the banks in these nations provide a remarkable amount of money in the form of subsidized loans with a long repayment period, especially for young couples who have some deposits in their accounts.
    • Last but not least, the purchase of a home is seen as a valuable long investment for some part of society that is attempting to have a bright future.
  • Simply put, when one has private property becomes retired who may better manage his living expenses either rent or sell them.
    • In my view, becoming a homeowner brings many merits especially for young couples.
  • First of all, a number of landlords tend to set stricter rules for their tenants.
  • In other words, tenants are not allowed to modify the decorations of their units, such as painting, repairing, and even changing certain things in the accommodation to make it attractive.
    • Indeed, if they change some part of their units, they may be reprimanded by landlords.
    • Secondly, in multiple nations, tenants suffer a multitude of difficulties when property-owners decide to rise in rent.
    • In fact, some occupants need to work hard to prepare the amount of money demanded by landlords as rent.
    • Therefore, receiving debt or saving money to purchase a personal house is a procedure that suits them.
  • In conclusion, my viewpoint is that buying private houses or apartments not only consider as financial support for many people but also frees them from difficult rules and heavy rent payments.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

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    • In my opinion, there are many reasons why some people tend to purchase houses and this tendency can bring many merits for themselves.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • In my opinion, there are many good reasons why some people tendprefer to purchase houses and this tendency can bring many merits for themselves.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
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    • On the one hand, there are two obvious benefits that explain why many people tend to buy accommodations instead of renting houses in several countries.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • On the one hand, tThere are two obvious benefits that explain why many people tend to buy accommodations instead of renting houses in severalo purchasing, rather than renting, accommodations in certain countries.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
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    • First and foremost, several state-owned banks offer appropriate situations for people who decide to become homeowners.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • First and foremost, several state-owned banks offer appropriate situations for people who decittractive lending terms for borrowing the funds needed to become homeownersmake a purchaase.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
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    • In other words, the banks in these nations provide a remarkable amount of money in the form of subsidized loans with a long repayment period, especially for young couples who have some deposits in their accounts.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • In other words, the banks in these nations provide a remarkable amount of moneyfunding (financing) in the form of subsidized loans with a long repayment period,s; this is especially forattractive to young couplebuyers who have some deposits in their accountsn't large amounts of cash on hand.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8
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    • Last but not least, the purchase of a home is seen as a valuable long investment for some part of society that is attempting to have a bright future.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Last but not leastSecond, the purchase of a home is seen as a valuable long-term investment for some part of society that is attempting to have a brightthe future.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
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    • Simply put, when one has private property becomes retired who may better manage his living expenses either rent or sell them.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10
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    • In other words, tenants are not allowed to modify the decorations of their units, such as painting, repairing, and even changing certain things in the accommodation to make it attractive.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 13DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 13
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    • Secondly, in multiple nations, tenants suffer a multitude of difficulties when property-owners decide to rise in rent.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Secondly, in multiple nations, tenants suffer a multitude of difficulties, tenants in many nations suffer financial hardship when property-owners decide to raise in rents.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 15DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 15
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    • Therefore, receiving debt or saving money to purchase a personal house is a procedure that suits them.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Therefore, receiving debt or saving money to purchase a personal house is a procedure thasaving money for the eventual purchase of a private property best suits them.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 17DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 17
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    • In conclusion, my viewpoint is that buying private houses or apartments not only consider as financial support for many people but also frees them from difficult rules and heavy rent payments.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 18DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 18