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  • Networks essay

    • I believe that having a wide network of people allows me to maximize my capabilities, as my ability to lead, influence and sustain those around me is closely linked to my ability to succeed and leverage the network to achieve my goals.
    • I have established extensive relationships during my academic and professional career with most of the doctors, technicians and physicists from all over Iraq.
    • Since I represented the female students in the university dormitory, it helped me to develop my current work by constantly communicating with them to obtain their guidance and advice in operating new devices, activating programs, how to use them, taking various tests, attending conferences and exchanging articles and scientific research.
    • All of this increased my communication skills and my ability to train several staff and students and to continue with them through networks to provide them with all the experience and knowledge I had.
    • Because of my good relations with the management and my colleagues and my apparent competence in work, I was nominated and participated in a course on the CT machine which was held in France and Germany at the end of 2014.
    • After my return to Iraq, I kept in touch with them for about 6 months until I was able to run all the software on the machine and add New tests.
  • Then it was able to form a wider network that extended beyond the borders of Iraq.
    • After that, I took the initiative to participate in a training course and training of more than 60 employees that included more than 10 hospitals, transferring the experiences and skills I obtained to my colleagues and raising the quality of examinations, thus increasing the number of patients examined.
  • It allowed me to get acquainted with many employees from all hospitals in the governorate.
    • After the course period was over, one of my colleagues from Basra Hospital introduced me to the management of the Medical Consultation Center at Basra College of Medicine, with whom I worked part-time.
    • There I got to know many other doctors, officials, and academics at Basra University and philanthropists from charitable organizations.
    • This helped me create a larger network of another kind, which supported my campaign to raise awareness against breast cancer by offering free and discounted services, holding meetings and exchanging ideas.
  • The ultimate goal of this campaign is to reduce the number of breast cancer cases through early detection and to make breast examinations a mandatory screening for women.
  • Therefore, when I receive the Chevening Scholarship, I will maintain strong relations between Iraq and the UK and continue to achieve Sustainable Development Goals in health and education.
  • The Chevening platform will make me part of a large network that will change my career for the better.
  • By connecting with alumni, we can leverage each other’s knowledge and experience to improve and change our communities for the better.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • I believe that having a wide network of people allows me to maximize my capabilities, as my ability to lead, influence and sustain those around me is closely linked to my ability to succeed and leverage the network to achieve my goals.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I believe that having a wide network of people allows me to maximize my capabilities, as my ability to lead, influence, and sustain those around me is closely linked to my ability to succeed and leverage the network to achieve my goals.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • I have established extensive relationships during my academic and professional career with most of the doctors, technicians and physicists from all over Iraq.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I have established extensive relationships during my academic and professional career with most of the doctors, technicians, and physicists from all over Iraq.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • Since I represented the female students in the university dormitory, it helped me to develop my current work by constantly communicating with them to obtain their guidance and advice in operating new devices, activating programs, how to use them, taking various tests, attending conferences and exchanging articles and scientific research.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Since I represented the female students in the university dormitory, it helped me to develop my current work by constantly communicating with them to obtain their guidance and advice in operating new devices, activating programs, how to use them, taking various tests, attending conferences, and exchanging articles and scientific research.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • All of this increased my communication skills and my ability to train several staff and students and to continue with them through networks to provide them with all the experience and knowledge I had.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • All of this increased my communication skills and my ability to train several staff and students and to continue working with them through networks to provide them with all the experience and knowledge I had.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • Because of my good relations with the management and my colleagues and my apparent competence in work, I was nominated and participated in a course on the CT machine which was held in France and Germany at the end of 2014.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Because of my good relations with the management and my colleagues and my apparent competence in my work, I was nominated and participated in a course on the CT machine, which was held in France and Germany at the end of 2014.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • After my return to Iraq, I kept in touch with them for about 6 months until I was able to run all the software on the machine and add New tests.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • After my return to Iraq, I kept in touch with them for about 6 months until I was able to run all the software on the machine and add Nnew tests.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
  • câu 8
    • After that, I took the initiative to participate in a training course and training of more than 60 employees that included more than 10 hospitals, transferring the experiences and skills I obtained to my colleagues and raising the quality of examinations, thus increasing the number of patients examined.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • After that, I took the initiative to participate in a training course and training offor more than 60 employees that included more than 10 hospitals, transferring the experiences and skills I obtained to my colleagues and raising the quality of examinations, thus increasing the number of patients examined.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
  • câu 10
    • After the course period was over, one of my colleagues from Basra Hospital introduced me to the management of the Medical Consultation Center at Basra College of Medicine, with whom I worked part-time.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • After the course period was over, one of my colleagues from Basra Hospital introduced me to the management of the Medical Consultation Centere at Basra College of Medicine, with whom I worked part-time.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
    • There I got to know many other doctors, officials, and academics at Basra University and philanthropists from charitable organizations.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • There I got to know many other doctors, officials, and academics at Basra University, ands well as philanthropists from charitable organizations.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
  • câu 12
    • This helped me create a larger network of another kind, which supported my campaign to raise awareness against breast cancer by offering free and discounted services, holding meetings and exchanging ideas.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • This helped me create a larger network of another kind, which supported my campaign to raise awareness against breast cancer by offering free and discounted services, holding meetings, and exchanging ideas.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
    • The ultimate goal of this campaign is to reduce the number of breast cancer cases through early detection and to make breast examinations a mandatory screening for women.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
  • câu 14
    • Therefore, when I receive the Chevening Scholarship, I will maintain strong relations between Iraq and the UK and continue to achieve Sustainable Development Goals in health and education.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14
  • câu 15
  • câu 16
    • By connecting with alumni, we can leverage each other’s knowledge and experience to improve and change our communities for the better.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16