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  • Networks essay

    • I believe that having a wide network of people allows me to maximize my capabilities, as my ability to lead, influence and sustain those around me is closely linked to my ability to succeed and leverage the network to achieve my goals.
    • I have established extensive relationships during my academic and professional career with most of the doctors, technicians and physicists from all over Iraq.
    • Since I represented the female students in the university dormitory, it helped me to develop my current work by constantly communicating with them to obtain their guidance and advice in operating new devices, activating programs, how to use them, taking various tests, attending conferences and exchanging articles and scientific research.
    • All of this increased my communication skills and my ability to train several staff and students and to continue with them through networks to provide them with all the experience and knowledge I had.
    • Because of my good relations with the management and my colleagues and my apparent competence in work, I was nominated and participated in a course on the CT machine which was held in France and Germany at the end of 2014.
    • After my return to Iraq, I kept in touch with them for about 6 months until I was able to run all the software on the machine and add New tests.
  • Then it was able to form a wider network that extended beyond the borders of Iraq.
    • After that, I took the initiative to participate in a training course and training of more than 60 employees that included more than 10 hospitals, transferring the experiences and skills I obtained to my colleagues and raising the quality of examinations, thus increasing the number of patients examined.
  • It allowed me to get acquainted with many employees from all hospitals in the governorate.
    • After the course period was over, one of my colleagues from Basra Hospital introduced me to the management of the Medical Consultation Center at Basra College of Medicine, with whom I worked part-time.
    • There I got to know many other doctors, officials, and academics at Basra University and philanthropists from charitable organizations.
    • This helped me create a larger network of another kind, which supported my campaign to raise awareness against breast cancer by offering free and discounted services, holding meetings and exchanging ideas.
  • The ultimate goal of this campaign is to reduce the number of breast cancer cases through early detection and to make breast examinations a mandatory screening for women.
  • Therefore, when I receive the Chevening Scholarship, I will maintain strong relations between Iraq and the UK and continue to achieve Sustainable Development Goals in health and education.
  • The Chevening platform will make me part of a large network that will change my career for the better.
  • By connecting with alumni, we can leverage each other’s knowledge and experience to improve and change our communities for the better.

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  • Sentence 1
    • I believe that having a wide network of people allows me to maximize my capabilities, as my ability to lead, influence and sustain those around me is closely linked to my ability to succeed and leverage the network to achieve my goals.
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    • I believe that having a wide network of people allows me to maximize my capabilities, as my ability to lead, influence, and sustain those around me is closely linked to my ability to succeed and leverage the network to achieve my goals.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 1
  • Sentence 2
    • I have established extensive relationships during my academic and professional career with most of the doctors, technicians and physicists from all over Iraq.
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    • I have established extensive relationships during my academic and professional career with most of the doctors, technicians, and physicists from all over Iraq.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2
  • Sentence 3
    • Since I represented the female students in the university dormitory, it helped me to develop my current work by constantly communicating with them to obtain their guidance and advice in operating new devices, activating programs, how to use them, taking various tests, attending conferences and exchanging articles and scientific research.
      Vote now!
    • Since I represented the female students in the university dormitory, it helped me to develop my current work by constantly communicating with them to obtain their guidance and advice in operating new devices, activating programs, how to use them, taking various tests, attending conferences, and exchanging articles and scientific research.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3
  • Sentence 4
    • All of this increased my communication skills and my ability to train several staff and students and to continue with them through networks to provide them with all the experience and knowledge I had.
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    • All of this increased my communication skills and my ability to train several staff and students and to continue working with them through networks to provide them with all the experience and knowledge I had.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4
  • Sentence 5
    • Because of my good relations with the management and my colleagues and my apparent competence in work, I was nominated and participated in a course on the CT machine which was held in France and Germany at the end of 2014.
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    • Because of my good relations with the management and my colleagues and my apparent competence in my work, I was nominated and participated in a course on the CT machine, which was held in France and Germany at the end of 2014.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
  • Sentence 6
    • After my return to Iraq, I kept in touch with them for about 6 months until I was able to run all the software on the machine and add New tests.
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    • After my return to Iraq, I kept in touch with them for about 6 months until I was able to run all the software on the machine and add Nnew tests.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6
  • Sentence 7
  • Sentence 8
    • After that, I took the initiative to participate in a training course and training of more than 60 employees that included more than 10 hospitals, transferring the experiences and skills I obtained to my colleagues and raising the quality of examinations, thus increasing the number of patients examined.
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    • After that, I took the initiative to participate in a training course and training offor more than 60 employees that included more than 10 hospitals, transferring the experiences and skills I obtained to my colleagues and raising the quality of examinations, thus increasing the number of patients examined.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 8
  • Sentence 9
  • Sentence 10
    • After the course period was over, one of my colleagues from Basra Hospital introduced me to the management of the Medical Consultation Center at Basra College of Medicine, with whom I worked part-time.
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    • After the course period was over, one of my colleagues from Basra Hospital introduced me to the management of the Medical Consultation Centere at Basra College of Medicine, with whom I worked part-time.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10
  • Sentence 11
    • There I got to know many other doctors, officials, and academics at Basra University and philanthropists from charitable organizations.
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    • There I got to know many other doctors, officials, and academics at Basra University, ands well as philanthropists from charitable organizations.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11
  • Sentence 12
    • This helped me create a larger network of another kind, which supported my campaign to raise awareness against breast cancer by offering free and discounted services, holding meetings and exchanging ideas.
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    • This helped me create a larger network of another kind, which supported my campaign to raise awareness against breast cancer by offering free and discounted services, holding meetings, and exchanging ideas.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 12
  • Sentence 13
    • The ultimate goal of this campaign is to reduce the number of breast cancer cases through early detection and to make breast examinations a mandatory screening for women.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 13
  • Sentence 14
    • Therefore, when I receive the Chevening Scholarship, I will maintain strong relations between Iraq and the UK and continue to achieve Sustainable Development Goals in health and education.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 14
  • Sentence 15
  • Sentence 16
    • By connecting with alumni, we can leverage each other’s knowledge and experience to improve and change our communities for the better.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 16