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Text from Layashsh - English

  • Networks essay

    • I believe that having a wide network of people allows me to maximize my capabilities, as my ability to lead, influence and sustain those around me is closely linked to my ability to succeed and leverage the network to achieve my goals.
    • I have established extensive relationships during my academic and professional career with most of the doctors, technicians and physicists from all over Iraq.
    • Since I represented the female students in the university dormitory, it helped me to develop my current work by constantly communicating with them to obtain their guidance and advice in operating new devices, activating programs, how to use them, taking various tests, attending conferences and exchanging articles and scientific research.
    • All of this increased my communication skills and my ability to train several staff and students and to continue with them through networks to provide them with all the experience and knowledge I had.
    • Because of my good relations with the management and my colleagues and my apparent competence in work, I was nominated and participated in a course on the CT machine which was held in France and Germany at the end of 2014.
    • After my return to Iraq, I kept in touch with them for about 6 months until I was able to run all the software on the machine and add New tests.
  • Then it was able to form a wider network that extended beyond the borders of Iraq.
    • After that, I took the initiative to participate in a training course and training of more than 60 employees that included more than 10 hospitals, transferring the experiences and skills I obtained to my colleagues and raising the quality of examinations, thus increasing the number of patients examined.
  • It allowed me to get acquainted with many employees from all hospitals in the governorate.
    • After the course period was over, one of my colleagues from Basra Hospital introduced me to the management of the Medical Consultation Center at Basra College of Medicine, with whom I worked part-time.
    • There I got to know many other doctors, officials, and academics at Basra University and philanthropists from charitable organizations.
    • This helped me create a larger network of another kind, which supported my campaign to raise awareness against breast cancer by offering free and discounted services, holding meetings and exchanging ideas.
  • The ultimate goal of this campaign is to reduce the number of breast cancer cases through early detection and to make breast examinations a mandatory screening for women.
  • Therefore, when I receive the Chevening Scholarship, I will maintain strong relations between Iraq and the UK and continue to achieve Sustainable Development Goals in health and education.
  • The Chevening platform will make me part of a large network that will change my career for the better.
  • By connecting with alumni, we can leverage each other’s knowledge and experience to improve and change our communities for the better.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Lause 1
    • I believe that having a wide network of people allows me to maximize my capabilities, as my ability to lead, influence and sustain those around me is closely linked to my ability to succeed and leverage the network to achieve my goals.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • I believe that having a wide network of people allows me to maximize my capabilities, as my ability to lead, influence, and sustain those around me is closely linked to my ability to succeed and leverage the network to achieve my goals.
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  • Lause 2
    • I have established extensive relationships during my academic and professional career with most of the doctors, technicians and physicists from all over Iraq.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • I have established extensive relationships during my academic and professional career with most of the doctors, technicians, and physicists from all over Iraq.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2
  • Lause 3
    • Since I represented the female students in the university dormitory, it helped me to develop my current work by constantly communicating with them to obtain their guidance and advice in operating new devices, activating programs, how to use them, taking various tests, attending conferences and exchanging articles and scientific research.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • Since I represented the female students in the university dormitory, it helped me to develop my current work by constantly communicating with them to obtain their guidance and advice in operating new devices, activating programs, how to use them, taking various tests, attending conferences, and exchanging articles and scientific research.
      AlexweissAlexweiss profile picture Kommentit
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3
  • Lause 4
    • All of this increased my communication skills and my ability to train several staff and students and to continue with them through networks to provide them with all the experience and knowledge I had.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • All of this increased my communication skills and my ability to train several staff and students and to continue working with them through networks to provide them with all the experience and knowledge I had.
      AlexweissAlexweiss profile picture Kommentit
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4
  • Lause 5
    • Because of my good relations with the management and my colleagues and my apparent competence in work, I was nominated and participated in a course on the CT machine which was held in France and Germany at the end of 2014.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • Because of my good relations with the management and my colleagues and my apparent competence in my work, I was nominated and participated in a course on the CT machine, which was held in France and Germany at the end of 2014.
      AlexweissAlexweiss profile picture Kommentit
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5
  • Lause 6
    • After my return to Iraq, I kept in touch with them for about 6 months until I was able to run all the software on the machine and add New tests.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • After my return to Iraq, I kept in touch with them for about 6 months until I was able to run all the software on the machine and add Nnew tests.
      AlexweissAlexweiss profile picture Kommentit
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 6
  • Lause 7
  • Lause 8
    • After that, I took the initiative to participate in a training course and training of more than 60 employees that included more than 10 hospitals, transferring the experiences and skills I obtained to my colleagues and raising the quality of examinations, thus increasing the number of patients examined.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • After that, I took the initiative to participate in a training course and training offor more than 60 employees that included more than 10 hospitals, transferring the experiences and skills I obtained to my colleagues and raising the quality of examinations, thus increasing the number of patients examined.
      AlexweissAlexweiss profile picture Kommentit
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 8
  • Lause 9
  • Lause 10
    • After the course period was over, one of my colleagues from Basra Hospital introduced me to the management of the Medical Consultation Center at Basra College of Medicine, with whom I worked part-time.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • After the course period was over, one of my colleagues from Basra Hospital introduced me to the management of the Medical Consultation Centere at Basra College of Medicine, with whom I worked part-time.
      AlexweissAlexweiss profile picture Kommentit
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 10
  • Lause 11
    • There I got to know many other doctors, officials, and academics at Basra University and philanthropists from charitable organizations.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • There I got to know many other doctors, officials, and academics at Basra University, ands well as philanthropists from charitable organizations.
      AlexweissAlexweiss profile picture Kommentit
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 11
  • Lause 12
    • This helped me create a larger network of another kind, which supported my campaign to raise awareness against breast cancer by offering free and discounted services, holding meetings and exchanging ideas.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • This helped me create a larger network of another kind, which supported my campaign to raise awareness against breast cancer by offering free and discounted services, holding meetings, and exchanging ideas.
      AlexweissAlexweiss profile picture Kommentit
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 12
  • Lause 13
    • The ultimate goal of this campaign is to reduce the number of breast cancer cases through early detection and to make breast examinations a mandatory screening for women.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 13
  • Lause 14
    • Therefore, when I receive the Chevening Scholarship, I will maintain strong relations between Iraq and the UK and continue to achieve Sustainable Development Goals in health and education.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 14
  • Lause 15
  • Lause 16
    • By connecting with alumni, we can leverage each other’s knowledge and experience to improve and change our communities for the better.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 16