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People with keep a pet at home has been increasing day by day in the world because TV programs and advertisements encourage that people keep a pet at home.

Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether these changes favorable.

As regards the effects of this, it is an opportunity to make a new friend and pets affects people both psychological and physical positively while the adverse effect is that some parents don’t want to keep a pet at home because they believe that pets need to live in their natural habitat.

First of all, one of the obvious positive effects is that pets are an opportunity to make a new friend these pets.

Most youth population would like to keep a pet at home because with the development of technology, they see that others keep a pet in their garden or home, which encourages teenagers to keep a pet at home.

If they keep a pet at home, they begin to increase their psychological and physical features.

For instance, if a person has no friends, pets will be their best friends and they need to walk their pets regularly.

On the other hand, some parents don’t want to keep a pet at their home because they believe pets both live in their natural habitat and are not suitable for living at home.

They had a chance to make a new friend but their parents didn’t let this chance.

People may make a new friend thanks to this but some parents don’t let keeping a pet at their home and therefore their children affects adversely.

I want to keep a pet at home as well but my parents don’t allow it.