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Teks daripada mahmut_mer - English

    • KEEPING A PET AT HOME

    • People with keep a pet at home has been increasing day by day in the world because TV programs and advertisements encourage that people keep a pet at home.
  • Pets bring new changes to the family order.
    • Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether these changes favorable.
    • As regards the effects of this, it is an opportunity to make a new friend and pets affects people both psychological and physical positively while the adverse effect is that some parents don’t want to keep a pet at home because they believe that pets need to live in their natural habitat.
    • First of all, one of the obvious positive effects is that pets are an opportunity to make a new friend these pets.
    • Most youth population would like to keep a pet at home because with the development of technology, they see that others keep a pet in their garden or home, which encourages teenagers to keep a pet at home.
    • If they keep a pet at home, they begin to increase their psychological and physical features.
    • For instance, if a person has no friends, pets will be their best friends and they need to walk their pets regularly.
    • On the other hand, some parents don’t want to keep a pet at their home because they believe pets both live in their natural habitat and are not suitable for living at home.
  • Furthermore, although children want to have a lot of pets at home, parents don’t let them, which is caused by ignorance.
  • In addition, their children may face psychological problems after a while.
    • They had a chance to make a new friend but their parents didn’t let this chance.
  • Taking everything into account, keeping a pet at home has positive as well as adverse effects.
    • People may make a new friend thanks to this but some parents don’t let keeping a pet at their home and therefore their children affects adversely.
    • I want to keep a pet at home as well but my parents don’t allow it.

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

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  • Ayat 1
    • People with keep a pet at home has been increasing day by day in the world because TV programs and advertisements encourage that people keep a pet at home.
      Undi sekarang!
    • People witho keep a pet at home hasve been increasing day by day inthroughout the world because TV programs and advertisements encourage that people to keep a pet at home.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
  • Ayat 2
  • Ayat 3
  • Ayat 4
    • As regards the effects of this, it is an opportunity to make a new friend and pets affects people both psychological and physical positively while the adverse effect is that some parents don’t want to keep a pet at home because they believe that pets need to live in their natural habitat.
      Undi sekarang!
    • As regards the effects of this, it is an opportunity to make a new friend and pets affects people's both psychological and physical positively while twell-being. The adverse effect is that some parents don’t want to keep a pet at home because they believe that pets need to live in their natural habitat.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
  • Ayat 5
  • Ayat 6
    • Most youth population would like to keep a pet at home because with the development of technology, they see that others keep a pet in their garden or home, which encourages teenagers to keep a pet at home.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Most of the youth population would like to keep a pet at home because, with the development of technology, they see that others keep a pet in their garden or home, which encourages teenagers to keep a pet at home.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6
  • Ayat 7
  • Ayat 8
    • For instance, if a person has no friends, pets will be their best friends and they need to walk their pets regularly.
      Undi sekarang!
    • For instance, if a person has no friends, pets will be their best friends, and they will need to walk their pets regularly.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8
  • Ayat 9
    • On the other hand, some parents don’t want to keep a pet at their home because they believe pets both live in their natural habitat and are not suitable for living at home.
      Undi sekarang!
    • On the other hand, some parents don’t want to keep a pet at their home because they believe pets both live in their natural habitat and are not suitable for living at home.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 9TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 9
  • Ayat 10
  • Ayat 11
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  • Ayat 13
  • Ayat 14
    • People may make a new friend thanks to this but some parents don’t let keeping a pet at their home and therefore their children affects adversely.
      Undi sekarang!
    • People may make a new friends thanks to this, but some parents don’t let keeping a pet at their home and therefore their childrentheir children have a pet at home, which affects them adversely.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 14TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 14
  • Ayat 15