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KEEPING A PET AT HOME
- People with keep a pet at home has been increasing day by day in the world because TV programs and advertisements encourage that people keep a pet at home.
- Pets bring new changes to the family order.
- Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether these changes favorable.
- As regards the effects of this, it is an opportunity to make a new friend and pets affects people both psychological and physical positively while the adverse effect is that some parents don’t want to keep a pet at home because they believe that pets need to live in their natural habitat.
- First of all, one of the obvious positive effects is that pets are an opportunity to make a new friend these pets.
- Most youth population would like to keep a pet at home because with the development of technology, they see that others keep a pet in their garden or home, which encourages teenagers to keep a pet at home.
- If they keep a pet at home, they begin to increase their psychological and physical features.
- For instance, if a person has no friends, pets will be their best friends and they need to walk their pets regularly.
- On the other hand, some parents don’t want to keep a pet at their home because they believe pets both live in their natural habitat and are not suitable for living at home.
- Furthermore, although children want to have a lot of pets at home, parents don’t let them, which is caused by ignorance.
- In addition, their children may face psychological problems after a while.
- They had a chance to make a new friend but their parents didn’t let this chance.
- Taking everything into account, keeping a pet at home has positive as well as adverse effects.
- People may make a new friend thanks to this but some parents don’t let keeping a pet at their home and therefore their children affects adversely.
- I want to keep a pet at home as well but my parents don’t allow it.
- mahmut_mer
August 2021
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