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    • KEEPING A PET AT HOME

    • People with keep a pet at home has been increasing day by day in the world because TV programs and advertisements encourage that people keep a pet at home.
  • Pets bring new changes to the family order.
    • Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether these changes favorable.
    • As regards the effects of this, it is an opportunity to make a new friend and pets affects people both psychological and physical positively while the adverse effect is that some parents don’t want to keep a pet at home because they believe that pets need to live in their natural habitat.
    • First of all, one of the obvious positive effects is that pets are an opportunity to make a new friend these pets.
    • Most youth population would like to keep a pet at home because with the development of technology, they see that others keep a pet in their garden or home, which encourages teenagers to keep a pet at home.
    • If they keep a pet at home, they begin to increase their psychological and physical features.
    • For instance, if a person has no friends, pets will be their best friends and they need to walk their pets regularly.
    • On the other hand, some parents don’t want to keep a pet at their home because they believe pets both live in their natural habitat and are not suitable for living at home.
  • Furthermore, although children want to have a lot of pets at home, parents don’t let them, which is caused by ignorance.
  • In addition, their children may face psychological problems after a while.
    • They had a chance to make a new friend but their parents didn’t let this chance.
  • Taking everything into account, keeping a pet at home has positive as well as adverse effects.
    • People may make a new friend thanks to this but some parents don’t let keeping a pet at their home and therefore their children affects adversely.
    • I want to keep a pet at home as well but my parents don’t allow it.

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