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- Learn English
Hi.
I am Lena from Kyiv.
- I want to learn English and want to have experience.
Please help me

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- Learn English
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- Learning English
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Hi.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- I am Lena from Kyiv.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- I want to learn English and want to have experience.
  Undi sekarang!
- I want to learn English and ~~want to hav~~be experienced in it.
  lidija0908 Ulasan
  
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- I ~~want~~'d like to learn English and ~~want to have experience.~~make new experiences. ( " I'd like to..." звучит не так категорично как " I want..." )))
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- Please help me
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4