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Hi.
I am Lena from Kyiv.
- I want to learn English and want to have experience.
Please help me

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- Hi.
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- I am Lena from Kyiv.
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- I want to learn English and want to have experience.
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- I ~~want~~'d like to learn English and ~~want to have experience.~~make new experiences. ( " I'd like to..." звучит не так категорично как " I want..." )))
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