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- Learn English
Hi.
I am Lena from Kyiv.
- I want to learn English and want to have experience.
Please help me

Lena123July 2013Voĉdoni nun!
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PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

Titolo
- Learn English
  Voĉdoni nun!
- Learning English
  lidija0908 Comments
  
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  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Titolo
Frazo 1
- Hi.
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
Frazo 2
- I am Lena from Kyiv.
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
Frazo 3
- I want to learn English and want to have experience.
  Voĉdoni nun!
- I want to learn English and ~~want to hav~~be experienced in it.
  lidija0908 Comments
  
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- I ~~want~~'d like to learn English and ~~want to have experience.~~make new experiences. ( " I'd like to..." звучит не так категорично как " I want..." )))
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  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
Frazo 4
- Please help me
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4