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متن از Muscle_Museum - English

  • Fashion

  • I'd like to tell you about fashion and it's influence on our life.
    • I think,fashion has a hug impact on young people.Because it is everywhere.We can listen about fashion from different mass media,our friends or even parents.
    • As it known, our clothes are our face.And we can find out some information about person if we only look at his garb.For example,if I see a man who has worn tidy clothes,I'll think that he is a good person.And, of course,I'll try to meet him.(However,the first impression is not right sometimes.And we must remember it.) As you know,we have to wear different clothes in different situations.For instance,pupils must wear school suit.
    • A lot of people think that fashion trends are important.They try to buy rich clothes.But as for me fashion is an unnecessary thing.Our clothes just must be pretty and comfortable for us.Do not care about people's opinions.

لطفا کمک کنید تا هر جمله تصحیح شود - English

  • جمله 1
  • جمله 2
  • جمله 3
    • As it known, our clothes are our face.And we can find out some information about person if we only look at his garb.For example,if I see a man who has worn tidy clothes,I'll think that he is a good person.And, of course,I'll try to meet him.(However,the first impression is not right sometimes.And we must remember it.) As you know,we have to wear different clothes in different situations.For instance,pupils must wear school suit.
      رای دهید!
    • As it is known, our clothes are our face.And we can find out some information about a person if we only look at his garb.For example,if I see a man who has worn tidy clothes,I'll think that he is a good person.And, of course,I'll try to meet him.(However,the first impression is not right sometimes.And we must remember it.)¶As you know,we have to wear different clothes in different situations.For instance,pupils must wear school suituniform.
    • یک تصحیح جدید اضافه کنید - جمله 3یک تصحیح جدید اضافه کنید - جمله 3
  • جمله 4
    • A lot of people think that fashion trends are important.They try to buy rich clothes.But as for me fashion is an unnecessary thing.Our clothes just must be pretty and comfortable for us.Do not care about people's opinions.
      رای دهید!
    • A lot of people think that fashion trends are important.They try to buy richexpensive clothes.But as for me fashion is an unnecessary thing.Our clothes just must be just pretty and comfortable for us. Do not care about people's opinions.
    • یک تصحیح جدید اضافه کنید - جمله 4یک تصحیح جدید اضافه کنید - جمله 4