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  • Fashion

  • I'd like to tell you about fashion and it's influence on our life.
    • I think,fashion has a hug impact on young people.Because it is everywhere.We can listen about fashion from different mass media,our friends or even parents.
    • As it known, our clothes are our face.And we can find out some information about person if we only look at his garb.For example,if I see a man who has worn tidy clothes,I'll think that he is a good person.And, of course,I'll try to meet him.(However,the first impression is not right sometimes.And we must remember it.) As you know,we have to wear different clothes in different situations.For instance,pupils must wear school suit.
    • A lot of people think that fashion trends are important.They try to buy rich clothes.But as for me fashion is an unnecessary thing.Our clothes just must be pretty and comfortable for us.Do not care about people's opinions.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

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    • I think,fashion has a hug impact on young people.Because it is everywhere.We can listen about fashion from different mass media,our friends or even parents.
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    • I think,fashion has a huge impact on young people.Because it is everywhere.We can listen about fashion from different mass media,our friends or even parents.
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    • As it known, our clothes are our face.And we can find out some information about person if we only look at his garb.For example,if I see a man who has worn tidy clothes,I'll think that he is a good person.And, of course,I'll try to meet him.(However,the first impression is not right sometimes.And we must remember it.) As you know,we have to wear different clothes in different situations.For instance,pupils must wear school suit.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • As it is known, our clothes are our face.And we can find out some information about a person if we only look at his garb.For example,if I see a man who has worn tidy clothes,I'll think that he is a good person.And, of course,I'll try to meet him.(However,the first impression is not right sometimes.And we must remember it.)¶As you know,we have to wear different clothes in different situations.For instance,pupils must wear school suituniform.
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    • A lot of people think that fashion trends are important.They try to buy rich clothes.But as for me fashion is an unnecessary thing.Our clothes just must be pretty and comfortable for us.Do not care about people's opinions.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • A lot of people think that fashion trends are important.They try to buy richexpensive clothes.But as for me fashion is an unnecessary thing.Our clothes just must be just pretty and comfortable for us. Do not care about people's opinions.
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