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متن از Symmons - English

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  • On this day, even before struggling I won !
  • This race had already been laid out in my spirit ; each bend ; each uneven terrain taken as a consideration.
    • Like you already know the result of the dice even before you throw it, it was just like, the beginning ; the middle ; and the end of the race was all on the same level, frozen in time.
    • Not for a second did I have an ounce of doubt of what was about to happen, not for a moment did a moments hesitation cross my mind.
    • The 75 others participants was for me only a simple figure like others, there could be 75 000 and that wouldn't mean anymore than the added zeros.
    • It was at the end that I knew, it was not a matter of amount of people or wich athlete whatever ability had he would then be and should be satisfied anyway with second place.
    • Because in this crazy story it is not in competing on equal terms, what they contributed with their bodies, I contributed with my spirit.
  • The physical effort that was going to be necessary with all the distress caused from homeostasis was only a secondary consideration, the physical strength has been reduced to a mere formality : the only compulsory way to complete the purpose.
    • The process once it is operating, each entity there was no other choice that preceded me, minute by minute.
  • No elements of surprise for me ; I knew what was going to happen in advance.
  • On this day, I was 14, I was in 4th year of Middle School and I won the Middle School's Cross-Country.
  • I knew later on that a large part of my opponents were stronger than me and that it was physically impossible for me to win.
  • But I ignored it, so I won...

لطفا کمک کنید تا هر جمله تصحیح شود - English