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My first postcast
Hello !
- It's my first time to write in this site.
- I would like to learn English to my future job!
- Someone to help me please?
- Sorry about my english! Bye

donnia78January 2013Bầu chọn ngay!
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Tiêu đề
- My first postcast
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Tiêu đề
câu 1
- Hello !
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
câu 2
- It's my first time to write in this site.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ~~It's my~~This is the first time tohat I write in this site.
  diehd123 Comments
  
  Report as spam?
- It's mythe first time tohat I write ion this site. / It's the first time that I post a message on this site.
  zdar Comments
  
  Report as spam?
- ~~It's my~~This is the first time tohat I have writte in on this site.
  jadams30 Comments
  
  Report as spam?
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
câu 3
- I would like to learn English to my future job!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I would like to learn English tofor my future job!.
  SapphireCandy Comments
  
  Report as spam?
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
câu 4
- Someone to help me please?
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- SIs there someone to help me please?
  diehd123 Comments
  
  Report as spam?
- SCan someone to help me please?
  jadams30 Comments
  
  Report as spam?
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
câu 5
- Sorry about my english! Bye
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- Sorry about my eEnglish! Bye
  diehd123 Comments
  
  Report as spam?
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5