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My first postcast
Hello !
- It's my first time to write in this site.
- I would like to learn English to my future job!
- Someone to help me please?
- Sorry about my english! Bye

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- My first postcast
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Sentence 1
- Hello !
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Sentence 2
- It's my first time to write in this site.
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- ~~It's my~~This is the first time tohat I write in this site.
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- It's mythe first time tohat I write ion this site. / It's the first time that I post a message on this site.
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Sentence 3
- I would like to learn English to my future job!
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- I would like to learn English tofor my future job!.
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Sentence 4
- Someone to help me please?
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- SIs there someone to help me please?
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- SCan someone to help me please?
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- Sorry about my english! Bye
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