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My first postcast
Hello !
- It's my first time to write in this site.
- I would like to learn English to my future job!
- Someone to help me please?
- Sorry about my english! Bye

donnia78January 2013투표하세요!
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- My first postcast
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 제목
문장 1
- Hello !
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- It's my first time to write in this site.
  투표하세요!
- ~~It's my~~This is the first time tohat I write in this site.
  diehd123 댓글
  
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- It's mythe first time tohat I write ion this site. / It's the first time that I post a message on this site.
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- ~~It's my~~This is the first time tohat I have writte in on this site.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I would like to learn English to my future job!
  투표하세요!
- I would like to learn English tofor my future job!.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- Someone to help me please?
  투표하세요!
- SIs there someone to help me please?
  diehd123 댓글
  
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- SCan someone to help me please?
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
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- Sorry about my english! Bye
  투표하세요!
- Sorry about my eEnglish! Bye
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5