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  • My House

    • My House is over 5 years old.My family moved to here in 2008.It is rather large and high house.It has total four floors and nine rooms.
    • My house is painted the light orange outside. it looks so warm and attractive. the first floor is the gallery where my father shows his art wooden furniture. the second, it has three rooms, include: living room, my room, and my parents's room. we just only have one kitchen and it is behind the gallery. the third floor has three rooms too. there are:my grandmother's room, my younger sister's room and one the other room but no one lives inside so we keep all of things esle of house inside it. and the highest floor is the religous place.
    • In all of the rooms in my house, i love my room most. i always feel comfortable in my room. it has a cool blue and almost everything is arranged and decorated from my idea. i love my house so much and very happy to live inside.

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  • جمله 2
    • My house is painted the light orange outside. it looks so warm and attractive. the first floor is the gallery where my father shows his art wooden furniture. the second, it has three rooms, include: living room, my room, and my parents's room. we just only have one kitchen and it is behind the gallery. the third floor has three rooms too. there are:my grandmother's room, my younger sister's room and one the other room but no one lives inside so we keep all of things esle of house inside it. and the highest floor is the religous place.
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    • MyThe house exterior is painted thea light orange outside. it looks so warm and attractive., which gives it a warm appearance. ¶

      On       the first floor is there is a gallery where my father shows his art wooden "art" furniture. the second, itThere is a kitchen located behind the gallery.¶

      The second floor       has three rooms, include:ing a living room, my bedroom, and my parents'sbed room. we just only have one kitchen and it is behind the gallery. t

      T      he third floor also has three rooms too. there are:, including my grandmother's bedroom, my younger sister's bedroom, and one the other room but no one lives inside so we keep all of things esle of house inside it. and the highest floor is the religous place.an "extra" room which we use to store various items.¶

      The top floor is our place of worship.¶

      NOTE: Nice place. So, about the top floor reserved for worship: Which do you worship... Ancestors, Buddah, Uncle Ho, Chairman Mao, America, maybe all of the above?
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    • یک تصحیح جدید اضافه کنید - جمله 2یک تصحیح جدید اضافه کنید - جمله 2
  • جمله 3
    • In all of the rooms in my house, i love my room most. i always feel comfortable in my room. it has a cool blue and almost everything is arranged and decorated from my idea. i love my house so much and very happy to live inside.
      100% GOOD (3 votes)
    • InOf all of the rooms in myour house, i I love my roomine the most. iI am always feel comfortable in my room. it ha, which is a cool blue and almost everythingcolor and is arranged and decorated from my ideaaccording to my personal tastes. iI love my house so much and am very happy to live insidbe living there.
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    • یک تصحیح جدید اضافه کنید - جمله 3یک تصحیح جدید اضافه کنید - جمله 3