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  • Anecdote

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  • When I was in school, I used to have breakfast in the cafeteria.
  • One day I invited my friend Laura to have breakfast before class, but she turned me down.
    • Precisely that day the dessert was Pera Cheese.
    • Everyone used to love that cheese, after I had breakfast, I went to the lady and asked for an extra Pera cheese.
  • After that, when everyone was walking towards their classes Laura saw all the students were having Pera cheese.
    • That´s when she realized she mess up.
    • Later, I met Laura, and she was down in the dumps, Pera Cheese was her favorite dessert.
    • I told her that the cafeteria doesn’t use to give that dessert but thankfully I had save one specially for her.
  • Laura saw the cheese and cheered up immediately. Thanks.

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