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متن از Mialee - English

  • A Trip

    • I went to a trip recently with my parents, where is located in the western of my guangzhou, named dinhu.
    • To be honest, it was a trip without any plane, because I like travelling following my heart, expecting everything happen.
    • After three hours coach, we had a cozy night in a hotel which was on a montain.
    • The other day, after breakfast, we began to go hiking.
    • It seemed to stroll inside a flourish green world.
    • The atmosphere and the environment were completely differet from what i used to.
    • I saw bunch of trees and banboos, hearing birds chirp on them.
    • Though there were many travelers, I still could heard the melody singing by the shimmering creeks.
    • And if you follow up the creeks, eventurlly, there was a peacegul and breathtaking lake, which liked a piece of flawless blue crystal.
    • It mirrored and doubled all objects, creating a picturesque scenery.At that time, I even could not move my eyes out of it, it was a wonderful work by the nature.
    • Feeling the refreshing breze on my face, sitting beside the thundering waterfalls, splashing the spring water with my legs, all these calmed my nerves.
    • For nature lovers, it is a must -see, to drink in the tranquility and serenity.

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