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  • Essay

    • In contemporary society, cities are considered to be suitable places for people because of entertainment facilities and job opportunities, while rural areas are pure and fresh.
    • In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative sides when I agree that moving to cities brings more disadvantageous impact.
    • To begin with, a majority of people come to large cities in order to study or find a suitable job which can create the life they ever wanted.
    • Consequently, it leads to a positive impact on developing peoples’ personal status and level of study.
    • In addition, people want to have more entertainment facilities like theatres and cinemas, which can be a problem to find in rural areas.
    • On the other hand, there are some negative sides which are vividly seen in leaving people in their mother towns.
    • Many farmers depart from their farms to find new opportunities in city centers forgetting about the decrease in producing fruits or vegetables.
    • It results in declining the number of p[products which are available only in the countryside.
    • Moreover, people are increasing air pollution in cities by bringing out car gases which are also harmful to the green life of municipalities.
    • To sum up, I definitely agree that the movement to downtowns contain a bad impact not only on the metropolis but on the whole world in case this movement is just for a short time.

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  • Sentence 1
    • In contemporary society, cities are considered to be suitable places for people because of entertainment facilities and job opportunities, while rural areas are pure and fresh.
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    • In contemporary society, cities are considered to be suitable places for people because of entertainment facilities and job opportunities, while rural areas are considered pure and fresh.
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    • In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative sides when I agree that moving to cities brings more disadvantageous impact.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative sides when I agree that moving to cities brings more disadvantageous impact.aspects of moving to the city. In my opinion, moving to the city generally has a more negative impact than living in a rural area.
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    • To begin with, a majority of people come to large cities in order to study or find a suitable job which can create the life they ever wanted.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • To begin with, aFirstly, the majority of people commove to large cities in order to study or find a suitable job which can create the life they ever wanted.to build the life they aspire to live.
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    • In addition, people want to have more entertainment facilities like theatres and cinemas, which can be a problem to find in rural areas.
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    • In addition, people want to have moreliving in the city have access to more facilities providing entertainment facilities like theatres and cinemas, whichereas in rural areas, those can be a problemhard to find in rural areas.
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    • Many farmers depart from their farms to find new opportunities in city centers forgetting about the decrease in producing fruits or vegetables.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • MThere are, for example, many farmers depart fromthat leave their farms to findollow new opportunities in the city centersand therefore forgetting about the decrease in producinged fruits or vegetables.
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    • Moreover, people are increasing air pollution in cities by bringing out car gases which are also harmful to the green life of municipalities.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • Moreover, people are increasing air pollution in cities by bringing out caremitting exhaust gasses which are also harmful to the green life of municipalities.that are harmful to the environment.
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    • To sum up, I definitely agree that the movement to downtowns contain a bad impact not only on the metropolis but on the whole world in case this movement is just for a short time.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • To sum up, I definitely agree that the movement to downtowns containincreasing number of people moving to bigger cities has a bad impact not only on the metropolicities themselves but on the wholentire world in case this movement is just for a short timproceeds to increase.
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