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Essay

• In contemporary society, cities are considered to be suitable places for people because of entertainment facilities and job opportunities, while rural areas are pure and fresh.

• In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative sides when I agree that moving to cities brings more disadvantageous impact.

• To begin with, a majority of people come to large cities in order to study or find a suitable job which can create the life they ever wanted.

• Consequently, it leads to a positive impact on developing peoples’ personal status and level of study.

• In addition, people want to have more entertainment facilities like theatres and cinemas, which can be a problem to find in rural areas.

• On the other hand, there are some negative sides which are vividly seen in leaving people in their mother towns.

• Many farmers depart from their farms to find new opportunities in city centers forgetting about the decrease in producing fruits or vegetables.

• It results in declining the number of p[products which are available only in the countryside.

• Moreover, people are increasing air pollution in cities by bringing out car gases which are also harmful to the green life of municipalities.

• To sum up, I definitely agree that the movement to downtowns contain a bad impact not only on the metropolis but on the whole world in case this movement is just for a short time.