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  • Essay

    • In contemporary society, cities are considered to be suitable places for people because of entertainment facilities and job opportunities, while rural areas are pure and fresh.
    • In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative sides when I agree that moving to cities brings more disadvantageous impact.
    • To begin with, a majority of people come to large cities in order to study or find a suitable job which can create the life they ever wanted.
    • Consequently, it leads to a positive impact on developing peoples’ personal status and level of study.
    • In addition, people want to have more entertainment facilities like theatres and cinemas, which can be a problem to find in rural areas.
    • On the other hand, there are some negative sides which are vividly seen in leaving people in their mother towns.
    • Many farmers depart from their farms to find new opportunities in city centers forgetting about the decrease in producing fruits or vegetables.
    • It results in declining the number of p[products which are available only in the countryside.
    • Moreover, people are increasing air pollution in cities by bringing out car gases which are also harmful to the green life of municipalities.
    • To sum up, I definitely agree that the movement to downtowns contain a bad impact not only on the metropolis but on the whole world in case this movement is just for a short time.

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    • In contemporary society, cities are considered to be suitable places for people because of entertainment facilities and job opportunities, while rural areas are pure and fresh.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • In contemporary society, cities are considered to be suitable places for people because of entertainment facilities and job opportunities, while rural areas are considered pure and fresh.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
    • In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative sides when I agree that moving to cities brings more disadvantageous impact.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative sides when I agree that moving to cities brings more disadvantageous impact.aspects of moving to the city. In my opinion, moving to the city generally has a more negative impact than living in a rural area.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • To begin with, a majority of people come to large cities in order to study or find a suitable job which can create the life they ever wanted.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • To begin with, aFirstly, the majority of people commove to large cities in order to study or find a suitable job which can create the life they ever wanted.to build the life they aspire to live.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
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    • In addition, people want to have more entertainment facilities like theatres and cinemas, which can be a problem to find in rural areas.
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    • In addition, people want to have moreliving in the city have access to more facilities providing entertainment facilities like theatres and cinemas, whichereas in rural areas, those can be a problemhard to find in rural areas.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
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    • On the other hand, there are some negative sides which are vividly seen in leaving people in their mother towns.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • On the other hand, there are someplenty of negative sides which are vividly seen in leavingaspects that can be seen in people leaving their mother townrural hometowns to move to big cities.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
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    • Many farmers depart from their farms to find new opportunities in city centers forgetting about the decrease in producing fruits or vegetables.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • MThere are, for example, many farmers depart fromthat leave their farms to findollow new opportunities in the city centersand therefore forgetting about the decrease in producinged fruits or vegetables.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
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    • Moreover, people are increasing air pollution in cities by bringing out car gases which are also harmful to the green life of municipalities.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Moreover, people are increasing air pollution in cities by bringing out caremitting exhaust gasses which are also harmful to the green life of municipalities.that are harmful to the environment.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
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    • To sum up, I definitely agree that the movement to downtowns contain a bad impact not only on the metropolis but on the whole world in case this movement is just for a short time.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • To sum up, I definitely agree that the movement to downtowns containincreasing number of people moving to bigger cities has a bad impact not only on the metropolicities themselves but on the wholentire world in case this movement is just for a short timproceeds to increase.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10