Nhờ sửa bài giúp

Văn bản từ Marleloup - English

    • Part of my personal statement - french student

    • This summer, to support (or reinforce or strengthen?) my project, I did an internship in the domain of Market Access at X, a French MedTech specialized in the development of innovative medical devices.
    • I worked onto US and French market and I acquired a thorough understanding of their healthcare system, actors, institutions and funding in order to understand their health policy and how to bring a medical device to the market.
    • It was difficult (or challenging?) because US and French health policy are very different but quite exciting and reinforced my desire (or willingness?) to study International Health Policy.
    • The MSc proposed by X is exactly what I am looking for, allowing me to have a deeper knowledge (or education?) in (International) Health Policy and to obtain tools to fully understand the complex challenges facing health all around the world and not just about the past or the present but also about what is coming next.
    • I also found very exciting the international community of the X, this diversity encourages social, economic and political discussions from an international perspective, empowered by different experiences, views and beliefs.
    • I wish to get involved in the Health Society of course but in The Medical Law and Bioethics Society as well.
    • This past months, questions regarding fundamental right like abortion, or vaccination with COVID-19 are raising bioethical conflicts, and as a healthcare professional, it is a valuable opportunity to discuss and debate ways to improve health systems with the leaders of tomorrow.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • This summer, to support (or reinforce or strengthen?) my project, I did an internship in the domain of Market Access at X, a French MedTech specialized in the development of innovative medical devices.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • This summer, in order to support (or reinforce or strengthen?) my projectmy project* (see comments), I did an internship in the domain of Market Access at X, a French MedTech specializeding in the development of innovative medical devices.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • I worked onto US and French market and I acquired a thorough understanding of their healthcare system, actors, institutions and funding in order to understand their health policy and how to bring a medical device to the market.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I worked ontoin the US and French markets and I acquired a thorough understanding of their healthcare systems, actors, institutions and funding in order to understand their health policyies and how to bring a medical device to the market.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • It was difficult (or challenging?) because US and French health policy are very different but quite exciting and reinforced my desire (or willingness?) to study International Health Policy.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It was difficult (or challenging?) because US and French health policy are verydiffer. Nevertheless, working through these different butces was quite an exciting process and reinforced my desire (or willingness?) to study Iinternational Hhealth Ppolicy.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • The MSc proposed by X is exactly what I am looking for, allowing me to have a deeper knowledge (or education?) in (International) Health Policy and to obtain tools to fully understand the complex challenges facing health all around the world and not just about the past or the present but also about what is coming next.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The MSc proposed by X is exactly what I am looking forrequire, allowing me to have a deepern my knowledge (or education?) in (Iin international) H health Ppolicy and to obtain the necessary tools tofor fully understanding the complex challenges facing health allcare around the world and- not just about the past or the present but also about what is coming nextinto the future.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • I also found very exciting the international community of the X, this diversity encourages social, economic and political discussions from an international perspective, empowered by different experiences, views and beliefs.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I also found very excitingind the international community of the X, tX to be very exciting. This diversity encourages social, economic and political discussions from an international perspective, empowered by different experiences, views and beliefs.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • I wish to get involved in the Health Society of course but in The Medical Law and Bioethics Society as well.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I wish to getbecome involved in not only the Health Society, of course, but in Talso the Medical Law and Bioethics Society as well.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • This past months, questions regarding fundamental right like abortion, or vaccination with COVID-19 are raising bioethical conflicts, and as a healthcare professional, it is a valuable opportunity to discuss and debate ways to improve health systems with the leaders of tomorrow.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ThisDuring these past months, questions regarding fundamental right likesuch as abortion, or vaccination with COVID-19 are raising bioethical conflicts, and a. As a healthcare professional, it is a valuable opportunity to discuss and debate ways tothe means for improveing health systems with the leaders of tomorrow. ¶
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7