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    • Part of my personal statement - french student

    • This summer, to support (or reinforce or strengthen?) my project, I did an internship in the domain of Market Access at X, a French MedTech specialized in the development of innovative medical devices.
    • I worked onto US and French market and I acquired a thorough understanding of their healthcare system, actors, institutions and funding in order to understand their health policy and how to bring a medical device to the market.
    • It was difficult (or challenging?) because US and French health policy are very different but quite exciting and reinforced my desire (or willingness?) to study International Health Policy.
    • The MSc proposed by X is exactly what I am looking for, allowing me to have a deeper knowledge (or education?) in (International) Health Policy and to obtain tools to fully understand the complex challenges facing health all around the world and not just about the past or the present but also about what is coming next.
    • I also found very exciting the international community of the X, this diversity encourages social, economic and political discussions from an international perspective, empowered by different experiences, views and beliefs.
    • I wish to get involved in the Health Society of course but in The Medical Law and Bioethics Society as well.
    • This past months, questions regarding fundamental right like abortion, or vaccination with COVID-19 are raising bioethical conflicts, and as a healthcare professional, it is a valuable opportunity to discuss and debate ways to improve health systems with the leaders of tomorrow.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English