טקסט של - English

    • Part of my personal statement - french student

    • This summer, to support (or reinforce or strengthen?) my project, I did an internship in the domain of Market Access at X, a French MedTech specialized in the development of innovative medical devices.
    • I worked onto US and French market and I acquired a thorough understanding of their healthcare system, actors, institutions and funding in order to understand their health policy and how to bring a medical device to the market.
    • It was difficult (or challenging?) because US and French health policy are very different but quite exciting and reinforced my desire (or willingness?) to study International Health Policy.
    • The MSc proposed by X is exactly what I am looking for, allowing me to have a deeper knowledge (or education?) in (International) Health Policy and to obtain tools to fully understand the complex challenges facing health all around the world and not just about the past or the present but also about what is coming next.
    • I also found very exciting the international community of the X, this diversity encourages social, economic and political discussions from an international perspective, empowered by different experiences, views and beliefs.
    • I wish to get involved in the Health Society of course but in The Medical Law and Bioethics Society as well.
    • This past months, questions regarding fundamental right like abortion, or vaccination with COVID-19 are raising bioethical conflicts, and as a healthcare professional, it is a valuable opportunity to discuss and debate ways to improve health systems with the leaders of tomorrow.

בבקשה, עזור לתקן כל משפט! - English

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  • משפט 1
    • This summer, to support (or reinforce or strengthen?) my project, I did an internship in the domain of Market Access at X, a French MedTech specialized in the development of innovative medical devices.
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    • This summer, in order to support (or reinforce or strengthen?) my projectmy project* (see comments), I did an internship in the domain of Market Access at X, a French MedTech specializeding in the development of innovative medical devices.
    • הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 1הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 1
  • משפט 2
    • I worked onto US and French market and I acquired a thorough understanding of their healthcare system, actors, institutions and funding in order to understand their health policy and how to bring a medical device to the market.
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    • I worked ontoin the US and French markets and I acquired a thorough understanding of their healthcare systems, actors, institutions and funding in order to understand their health policyies and how to bring a medical device to the market.
    • הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 2הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 2
  • משפט 3
    • It was difficult (or challenging?) because US and French health policy are very different but quite exciting and reinforced my desire (or willingness?) to study International Health Policy.
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    • It was difficult (or challenging?) because US and French health policy are verydiffer. Nevertheless, working through these different butces was quite an exciting process and reinforced my desire (or willingness?) to study Iinternational Hhealth Ppolicy.
    • הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 3הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 3
  • משפט 4
    • The MSc proposed by X is exactly what I am looking for, allowing me to have a deeper knowledge (or education?) in (International) Health Policy and to obtain tools to fully understand the complex challenges facing health all around the world and not just about the past or the present but also about what is coming next.
      Vote now!
    • The MSc proposed by X is exactly what I am looking forrequire, allowing me to have a deepern my knowledge (or education?) in (Iin international) H health Ppolicy and to obtain the necessary tools tofor fully understanding the complex challenges facing health allcare around the world and- not just about the past or the present but also about what is coming nextinto the future.
    • הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 4הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 4
  • משפט 5
    • I also found very exciting the international community of the X, this diversity encourages social, economic and political discussions from an international perspective, empowered by different experiences, views and beliefs.
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    • I also found very excitingind the international community of the X, tX to be very exciting. This diversity encourages social, economic and political discussions from an international perspective, empowered by different experiences, views and beliefs.
    • הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 5הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 5
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  • משפט 7
    • This past months, questions regarding fundamental right like abortion, or vaccination with COVID-19 are raising bioethical conflicts, and as a healthcare professional, it is a valuable opportunity to discuss and debate ways to improve health systems with the leaders of tomorrow.
      Vote now!
    • ThisDuring these past months, questions regarding fundamental right likesuch as abortion, or vaccination with COVID-19 are raising bioethical conflicts, and a. As a healthcare professional, it is a valuable opportunity to discuss and debate ways tothe means for improveing health systems with the leaders of tomorrow. ¶
    • הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 7הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 7