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  • Should boys and girls go to separate schools or not ?

    • The issue I will be discussing regarding this topic is whether or not boys and girls should go to separate schools.
  • This is a very important matter because many experts have been debating about this subject.
    • In my point of view boys and girls should go single sex schools.
    • I believe this because research found that the learning of the different gender is different, and what works for one gender doesn’t work for the other.
    • Studies show that girls do well in math and science in single sex schools, while boys do well in poetry and music.
    • Furthermore, Experts believe that competition in academics between boys and girls is not healthy.
    • Girls try to finish their works faster than boys in order to impress them, and this would develop stress and anxiety between boys who’s struggling with their work.
    • Lastly, to respond to those who claim that going to separate single sex schools would create problems like interacting with each other in the future when they work together.
    • Going to single sex schools don’t mean separate them totally, because they can interact in their house and neighbors.
    • And as a research shows that the majorities of girls who attend single sex schools build and develop self confident which will prepare them to interact properly in the society.
    • To conclude, we may reach from regarding these factors is boys and girls should go to single gender schools.
    • Of course there are disadvantages going to single sex schools, we need to put a lot of efforts to ensure that the system of single sex schools is successfully implemented.

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  • câu 1
    • The issue I will be discussing regarding this topic is whether or not boys and girls should go to separate schools.
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    • ¶The issue I will be discussing regarding this topic, is whether or not boys and girls should go to separate schools.
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    • I believe this because research found that the learning of the different gender is different, and what works for one gender doesn’t work for the other.
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    • I believe this because researchers found that the learning of the different genders is different, and what works for one gender doesn’t work for the other.
    • I believe this because researchers found that the learning of the different gender is differentverse, and what works for one gender doesn't work for the other.
    • I believe this because research foundhas shown that the learning of the different gender is differentprocesses differ according to gender, and what works for one gender doesn’t work for the other.
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  • câu 5
    • Studies show that girls do well in math and science in single sex schools, while boys do well in poetry and music.
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    • Studies show that girls do well in math and science in single -sex schools, while boys do well in poetry and music.
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    • Girls try to finish their works faster than boys in order to impress them, and this would develop stress and anxiety between boys who’s struggling with their work.
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    • Girls try to finish their works faster than boys in order to impress them, and this would develop stress and anxiety between boys who’sre struggling with their work.
    • Girls try to finish their works faster than boys in order to impress them, and this would developlead to stress and anxiety betweenamong boys who’s are struggling with their work.
      100% GOOD (3 votes)
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    • Lastly, to respond to those who claim that going to separate single sex schools would create problems like interacting with each other in the future when they work together.
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    • Lastly, to respond to those who claim that going to separate single -sex schools would create problems like interacting with each other in the future when they work together.,
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    • Going to single sex schools don’t mean separate them totally, because they can interact in their house and neighbors.
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    • Ggoing to single -sex schools don’esn't mean to separate them totalcompletely, because they can interact in their house and with their neighbors.
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    • And as a research shows that the majorities of girls who attend single sex schools build and develop self confident which will prepare them to interact properly in the society.
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    • And as a research shows that, the majoritiesy of girls who attend single -sex schools build and develop self -confidentce which will prepare them to interact properly in the society.
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    • Of course there are disadvantages going to single sex schools, we need to put a lot of efforts to ensure that the system of single sex schools is successfully implemented.
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    • Of course there are disadvantages going to single -sex schools, --we need to put in a lot of efforts to ensure that the system of single -sex schools is successfully implemented. ¶
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