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BANTU BUAT PEMBETULAN SEKARANG!Dibetulkan

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  • Should boys and girls go to separate schools or not ?

    • The issue I will be discussing regarding this topic is whether or not boys and girls should go to separate schools.
  • This is a very important matter because many experts have been debating about this subject.
    • In my point of view boys and girls should go single sex schools.
    • I believe this because research found that the learning of the different gender is different, and what works for one gender doesn’t work for the other.
    • Studies show that girls do well in math and science in single sex schools, while boys do well in poetry and music.
    • Furthermore, Experts believe that competition in academics between boys and girls is not healthy.
    • Girls try to finish their works faster than boys in order to impress them, and this would develop stress and anxiety between boys who’s struggling with their work.
    • Lastly, to respond to those who claim that going to separate single sex schools would create problems like interacting with each other in the future when they work together.
    • Going to single sex schools don’t mean separate them totally, because they can interact in their house and neighbors.
    • And as a research shows that the majorities of girls who attend single sex schools build and develop self confident which will prepare them to interact properly in the society.
    • To conclude, we may reach from regarding these factors is boys and girls should go to single gender schools.
    • Of course there are disadvantages going to single sex schools, we need to put a lot of efforts to ensure that the system of single sex schools is successfully implemented.

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

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    • I believe this because research found that the learning of the different gender is different, and what works for one gender doesn’t work for the other.
      Undi sekarang!
    • I believe this because researchers found that the learning of the different genders is different, and what works for one gender doesn’t work for the other.
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      33% GOOD (3 votes)
    • I believe this because researchers found that the learning of the different gender is differentverse, and what works for one gender doesn’'t work for the other.
      Tony111sterTony111ster profile picture Ulasan
      33% GOOD (3 votes)
    • I believe this because research foundhas shown that the learning of the different gender is differentprocesses differ according to gender, and what works for one gender doesn’t work for the other.
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      100% GOOD (4 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
  • Ayat 5
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  • Ayat 7
    • Girls try to finish their works faster than boys in order to impress them, and this would develop stress and anxiety between boys who’s struggling with their work.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Girls try to finish their works faster than boys in order to impress them, and this would develop stress and anxiety between boys who’sre struggling with their work.
      Tony111sterTony111ster profile picture Ulasan
      50% GOOD (2 votes)
    • Girls try to finish their works faster than boys in order to impress them, and this would developlead to stress and anxiety betweenamong boys who’s are struggling with their work.
      0obluo00obluo0 profile picture Ulasan
      100% GOOD (3 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7
  • Ayat 8
    • Lastly, to respond to those who claim that going to separate single sex schools would create problems like interacting with each other in the future when they work together.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Lastly, to respond to those who claim that going to separate single -sex schools would create problems like interacting with each other in the future when they work together.,
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      50% GOOD (2 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8
  • Ayat 9
    • Going to single sex schools don’t mean separate them totally, because they can interact in their house and neighbors.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Ggoing to single -sex schools don’esn't mean to separate them totalcompletely, because they can interact in their house and with their neighbors.
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      33% GOOD (3 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 9TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 9
  • Ayat 10
    • And as a research shows that the majorities of girls who attend single sex schools build and develop self confident which will prepare them to interact properly in the society.
      Undi sekarang!
    • And as a research shows that, the majoritiesy of girls who attend single -sex schools build and develop self -confidentce which will prepare them to interact properly in the society.
      Tony111sterTony111ster profile picture Ulasan
      100% GOOD (3 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 10TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 10
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  • Ayat 12
    • Of course there are disadvantages going to single sex schools, we need to put a lot of efforts to ensure that the system of single sex schools is successfully implemented.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Of course there are disadvantages going to single -sex schools, --we need to put in a lot of efforts to ensure that the system of single -sex schools is successfully implemented. ¶
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      100% GOOD (2 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 12TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 12