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    • An example of when an organization had to change is when the company where my mom works decided to switch to a home office one month before an official lockdown was announced by the government because of COVID.
  • This is not an obvious example of technological change in a company when its employees had to quickly master new programs for work.
    • The most difficult thing was for the older generation, they had to learn to use zoom, electronic document circulation, and departments learn to communicate with each other in messengers instead of going to each other’s office as before.
    • Of course, people were unhappy with such changes and still wanted to go to the office until they were officially banned by the state.
    • People resisted such changes because the new work format was unusual for them and disrupted their order of affairs. to execute changes, the company held free webinars for its employees so that they learn to use new programs for them during working hours and do not waste employees’ free time.
    • The company also involved employees in an active discussion of the changes and some improvements were suggested by employees who also later helped to implement these changes.
    • As a result, in a month the company switched to a remote type of work, and by the time all other companies were forced to close by order and in a hurry to adapt their business processes, the company where my mother works was already functioning effectively.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Sentence 1
    • An example of when an organization had to change is when the company where my mom works decided to switch to a home office one month before an official lockdown was announced by the government because of COVID.
      Stem nou!
    • An example of when an organization had to change is when the company where my mom works decided to switch to a home offichave its employees work from home one month before an official lockdown was announced by the government because of COVID.
    • An example of when an organization had to change is when the company where my mom works decided to switch to a home officworking from home one month before an official lockdown was announced by the government because of COVID19.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 1VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 1
  • Sentence 2
  • Sentence 3
    • The most difficult thing was for the older generation, they had to learn to use zoom, electronic document circulation, and departments learn to communicate with each other in messengers instead of going to each other’s office as before.
      Stem nou!
    • The most difficult thing was for the older generation, t. They had to learn how to use zZoom, and electronic document circulation, and. Also, departments had to learn to communicate with each other in messengers instead of going to each other's office as before.
    • The most difficult thing was for the older generation, tolder generation had the most difficulties adapting. They had to learn to use zoom, electronic document circulation, and d. Departments additionally needed to learn how to communicate with each other inwith messenger programs instead of physically going to each other’s office as before.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 3VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 3
  • Sentence 4
  • Sentence 5
    • People resisted such changes because the new work format was unusual for them and disrupted their order of affairs. to execute changes, the company held free webinars for its employees so that they learn to use new programs for them during working hours and do not waste employees’ free time.
      Stem nou!
    • People resisted such changes because the new work format was unusual for them and disrupted their order of affairs. tTo execute changes, the company held free webinars for its employees so that they can learn how to use new programs for them during working hours and do not waste employees' free time.
    • People resisted such changes because the new work format was unusual for them and disrupted their order of affairestablished habits. tTo exechelp bring aboute changes, the company held free webinars during working hours for its employees so that they could learn how to use new programs for them during working hours and do not waste employees’and not infringe on their free time.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 5VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 5
  • Sentence 6
    • The company also involved employees in an active discussion of the changes and some improvements were suggested by employees who also later helped to implement these changes.
      Stem nou!
    • The company also involved employees in an active discussion of the changes, and some improvements were suggested by employees who also later helped to implement these changes.
    • The company also involved employees in an active discussion ofs about the changes and s. Some improvements were suggested by employees - who also later helped toin their implement these changesation.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 6VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 6
  • Sentence 7
    • As a result, in a month the company switched to a remote type of work, and by the time all other companies were forced to close by order and in a hurry to adapt their business processes, the company where my mother works was already functioning effectively.
      Stem nou!
    • As a result, in a month, the company switched to a remote type of work, and by the time all other companies were forced to close by order and in a hurry to adapt their business processes, the company where my mother works was already functioning effectively.
    • As a result, in at took just one month for the company to switched to a remote type of work, and bworking remotely. By theat time, all other companies’ office buildings were forced to close by order and in a hurry to adapt their business processesgovernment order and these other companies were in a hurry to massively overhaul their business operations. On the other hand, the company where my mother works was already functioning effectively.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 7VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 7