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BANTU BUAT PEMBETULAN SEKARANG!Dibetulkan

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    • When I think about the time when I set a goal and didn’t accomplish it takes me to a bunch of goals that had not been set properly.
    • For example, a couple of years ago I wanted to become a fashion photographer.
    • I haven’t made any progress towards this goal.
    • Maybe my desire was not strong enough, but I think the reason for this is an unspecified goal, which, moreover, was not limited by a time frame.
    • I have not identified any objectives for this goal and only now I understand, after learning so many crucial information about strategy and goal setting, that it was not even a goal, simply it was a wish.
    • So it was doomed to fail as a goal from the start.
    • The opposite example of this goal is ”to earn and save X amount of money by the end of October 2018 to relocate to Bali and stay there at least during the winter season”.
    • I think I achieved that goal not only because I was highly motivated to make this journey, but also because there were specific numbers like date and amount of money.

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

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  • Ayat 1
    • When I think about the time when I set a goal and didn’t accomplish it takes me to a bunch of goals that had not been set properly.
      Undi sekarang!
    • When I think about the time when I set a goal and didn’t accomplish it, it takes me back to a bunch of goals that had not been set properly.
      Susan30Susan30 profile picture Ulasan 1
      Undi sekarang!
    • When I'm thinking about the time when I set a goals and didn’t accomplish it takes me to a bunch of goals thatthem, I'm often reminded about many which had not been set properly set.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Ulasan 1
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
  • Ayat 2
  • Ayat 3
  • Ayat 4
    • Maybe my desire was not strong enough, but I think the reason for this is an unspecified goal, which, moreover, was not limited by a time frame.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Maybe my desire was not strong enough, but I think the reason for this is that it was an unspecified goal, which, moreover, was not limited by a time frame.
      Susan30Susan30 profile picture Ulasan
      Undi sekarang!
    • Maybe my desire was not strong enough, but I think the reason for this is it being an unspecified goal, which, moreover, was not limited by a time frame.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Ulasan 1
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
  • Ayat 5
    • I have not identified any objectives for this goal and only now I understand, after learning so many crucial information about strategy and goal setting, that it was not even a goal, simply it was a wish.
      Undi sekarang!
    • I have not identified any objectives for this goal and only now I understand, after learning so manyuch crucial information about strategy and goal setting, that it was not even a goal, simply it wasit was simply a wish.
      Susan30Susan30 profile picture Ulasan
      Undi sekarang!
    • I have not identified any objectives for this goal and only now I understand, after learning so manyuch crucial information about strategy and goal setting, that it was not even a goal, but simply it was a wish.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Ulasan 1
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5
  • Ayat 6
  • Ayat 7
    • The opposite example of this goal is ”to earn and save X amount of money by the end of October 2018 to relocate to Bali and stay there at least during the winter season”.
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    • The opposite A counter-example of this goal is ”to earn and save X amount of money by the end of October 2018 to relocate to Bali and stay there at least during the winter season”.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Ulasan 1
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7
  • Ayat 8
    • I think I achieved that goal not only because I was highly motivated to make this journey, but also because there were specific numbers like date and amount of money.
      Undi sekarang!
    • I think I achieved that goal not only because I was highly motivated to make this journey, but also because there were specific numbers like the date and amount of money.
      Susan30Susan30 profile picture Ulasan 1
      Undi sekarang!
    • I think I achieved that gomy holiday in Bali not only because I was highly motivated to make this journey, but also because there were specific numbers like datedue to there being specific targets such as the holiday duration and amount of money to save.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Ulasan 1
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8