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    • When I think about the time when I set a goal and didn’t accomplish it takes me to a bunch of goals that had not been set properly.
    • For example, a couple of years ago I wanted to become a fashion photographer.
    • I haven’t made any progress towards this goal.
    • Maybe my desire was not strong enough, but I think the reason for this is an unspecified goal, which, moreover, was not limited by a time frame.
    • I have not identified any objectives for this goal and only now I understand, after learning so many crucial information about strategy and goal setting, that it was not even a goal, simply it was a wish.
    • So it was doomed to fail as a goal from the start.
    • The opposite example of this goal is ”to earn and save X amount of money by the end of October 2018 to relocate to Bali and stay there at least during the winter season”.
    • I think I achieved that goal not only because I was highly motivated to make this journey, but also because there were specific numbers like date and amount of money.

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    • When I think about the time when I set a goal and didn’t accomplish it takes me to a bunch of goals that had not been set properly.
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    • When I think about the time when I set a goal and didn’t accomplish it, it takes me back to a bunch of goals that had not been set properly.
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    • When I'm thinking about the time when I set a goals and didn’t accomplish it takes me to a bunch of goals thatthem, I'm often reminded about many which had not been set properly set.
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    • Maybe my desire was not strong enough, but I think the reason for this is an unspecified goal, which, moreover, was not limited by a time frame.
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    • Maybe my desire was not strong enough, but I think the reason for this is that it was an unspecified goal, which, moreover, was not limited by a time frame.
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    • Maybe my desire was not strong enough, but I think the reason for this is it being an unspecified goal, which, moreover, was not limited by a time frame.
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    • I have not identified any objectives for this goal and only now I understand, after learning so many crucial information about strategy and goal setting, that it was not even a goal, simply it was a wish.
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    • I have not identified any objectives for this goal and only now I understand, after learning so manyuch crucial information about strategy and goal setting, that it was not even a goal, simply it wasit was simply a wish.
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    • I have not identified any objectives for this goal and only now I understand, after learning so manyuch crucial information about strategy and goal setting, that it was not even a goal, but simply it was a wish.
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    • The opposite example of this goal is ”to earn and save X amount of money by the end of October 2018 to relocate to Bali and stay there at least during the winter season”.
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    • The opposite A counter-example of this goal is ”to earn and save X amount of money by the end of October 2018 to relocate to Bali and stay there at least during the winter season”.
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    • I think I achieved that goal not only because I was highly motivated to make this journey, but also because there were specific numbers like date and amount of money.
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    • I think I achieved that goal not only because I was highly motivated to make this journey, but also because there were specific numbers like the date and amount of money.
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    • I think I achieved that gomy holiday in Bali not only because I was highly motivated to make this journey, but also because there were specific numbers like datedue to there being specific targets such as the holiday duration and amount of money to save.
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