טקסט של - English

  • Have I made any mistakes in the text below?

    • When I think about the time when I set a goal and didn’t accomplish it takes me to a bunch of goals that had not been set properly.
    • For example, a couple of years ago I wanted to become a fashion photographer.
    • I haven’t made any progress towards this goal.
    • Maybe my desire was not strong enough, but I think the reason for this is an unspecified goal, which, moreover, was not limited by a time frame.
    • I have not identified any objectives for this goal and only now I understand, after learning so many crucial information about strategy and goal setting, that it was not even a goal, simply it was a wish.
    • So it was doomed to fail as a goal from the start.
    • The opposite example of this goal is ”to earn and save X amount of money by the end of October 2018 to relocate to Bali and stay there at least during the winter season”.
    • I think I achieved that goal not only because I was highly motivated to make this journey, but also because there were specific numbers like date and amount of money.

בבקשה, עזור לתקן כל משפט! - English