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BANTU BUAT PEMBETULAN SEKARANG!Dibetulkan

Teks daripada Nimdis - English

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- My first message here!
- Hello I am from Russia and I study English.
- Unfortunaly, I understand native speakers too bad, but I try to study hard! =)

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MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

Title
- My first message here!
  Undi sekarang!
- My first message is here!
  RumeysaAkgun Ulasan
  
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- MThis is my first message ~~here~~!
  Lelush Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Hello I am from Russia and I study English.
  Undi sekarang!
- Hello I am from Russia and I ~~study English.~~am studying English. (gives the idea that you are actively engaged in studying English at the moment)¶I study English. (also present tense but more factual, general)
  Neeni Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- Unfortunaly, I understand native speakers too bad, but I try to study hard! =)
  Undi sekarang!
- Unfortunately, I understand native speakers too bad, but I try to study hard! =)
  RumeysaAkgun Ulasan
  
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- Unfortunately, I do not understand native speakers ~~too bad~~well, but I will try to study hard! =)
  zinjutea Ulasan
  
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- Unfortunately, I don't understand native speakers ~~too bad, but I~~well, but I really try to study hard! =)
  arckain Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2