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- My first message here!
- Hello I am from Russia and I study English.
- Unfortunaly, I understand native speakers too bad, but I try to study hard! =)

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- My first message here!
  Vote now!
- My first message is here!
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- MThis is my first message ~~here~~!
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Sentence 1
- Hello I am from Russia and I study English.
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- Hello I am from Russia and I ~~study English.~~am studying English. (gives the idea that you are actively engaged in studying English at the moment)¶I study English. (also present tense but more factual, general)
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Sentence 2
- Unfortunaly, I understand native speakers too bad, but I try to study hard! =)
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- Unfortunately, I understand native speakers too bad, but I try to study hard! =)
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- Unfortunately, I do not understand native speakers ~~too bad~~well, but I will try to study hard! =)
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- Unfortunately, I don't understand native speakers ~~too bad, but I~~well, but I really try to study hard! =)
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