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• What are the advantages yo this?

• Note: Leftovers can contaminate the water and soil => decrease the productivity of crops creature which accidentally eats them, may suffer the same as human and even dead=> also lead to pollute environment.

• Work: Nowadays, there is a fact that many chemicals and preservatives are being used in many processes making foods and man-made meals.

• This fact has two advantages in product preservation and in attracting people.

• However, this is also the factor causing bad effects for both human and animal health and pollutes the environment.

• I strongly agree that the advantages can never overweight the disadvantages.

• Basically, using preservatives and chemicals in foods and man-made meals is a good way in preserving the foods.

• By it’s effect decreasing the speed of decomposing chemical reaction, preservatives are being mixed in the making food processes.

• For instant, a fried chicken wing can still be able to use for longer than 5 days if it’s process has chemicals.

• The next benefit is the preservative can improve the meal appearance look more tasty.

• On the other hand, too based on chemicals and preservatives also can result three disadvantages.

• The first disadvantage is the bad effects for health.

• People, who usually interacts with the food consist of chemicals, in a short term, they can get sick or stomachache.

• They may suffer from cancer and may dead by the poisoned food.

• One other bad consequence is increasing the level of polluted environment.

• The leftovers contaminate rivers and soil, leading to the drop of crop’s productivity.

• Poisoned leftovers also may accidentally be eaten by animals.

• In conclusion, although using chemicals and preservatives in food and man-made processes increases the expiry day of the production and the appearance of the production, it also take responsibility for both people and animals’ health issues and polluted environment.

• This is a reference for the fact that the disadvantages overweight the advantages.