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Văn bản từ rainness3 - English

    • why not be afaraid

    • Hi all, Have you ever been afraid of something which pass off long away of your home, for example: War, bad gays, murder...
    • I live on my own, and far away of my cuntry, but when i watch TV, read news papers or browse on facebook, twitter and so, and see what happen at home, i'am affraid for my familly, my littles brothers, dad and mom.
    • But in these moments i praylike a crazy boy God to protect them until i finish my PhD study and find a job to bring them in a other place.
    • Everyday i pray fo r them and for all the world, which is divided into deux parts, on the one hand bad personnes and on the other hand people who try to live, and fighting to survive. Help us!

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  • câu 1
    • Hi all, Have you ever been afraid of something which pass off long away of your home, for example: War, bad gays, murder...
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Hi alleverybody,¶Have you ever been afraid of something which pass off longfar away ofrom your home, for example: War, bad gays, murder...
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • I live on my own, and far away of my cuntry, but when i watch TV, read news papers or browse on facebook, twitter and so, and see what happen at home, i'am affraid for my familly, my littles brothers, dad and mom.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I live on my own, and far away ofrom my country, but when i watch TV, read news papers or browse on facebook, twitter and so, and see what happen at home, i' am affraid for my familly, my littles brothers, dad and mom.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • But in these moments i praylike a crazy boy God to protect them until i finish my PhD study and find a job to bring them in a other place.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • But in these moments i pray God like a crazy boy God to protect them until i finish my PhD study and find a job to bring them in a other place.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • Everyday i pray fo r them and for all the world, which is divided into deux parts, on the one hand bad personnes and on the other hand people who try to live, and fighting to survive. Help us!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Everyday i pray fo r them and for all the world, which is divided into deuxtwo parts,: on the one hand bad personnesople and on the other hand people who try to live, and fightstruggling to survive. Help us!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4