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Text from rainness3 - English

    • why not be afaraid

    • Hi all, Have you ever been afraid of something which pass off long away of your home, for example: War, bad gays, murder...
    • I live on my own, and far away of my cuntry, but when i watch TV, read news papers or browse on facebook, twitter and so, and see what happen at home, i'am affraid for my familly, my littles brothers, dad and mom.
    • But in these moments i praylike a crazy boy God to protect them until i finish my PhD study and find a job to bring them in a other place.
    • Everyday i pray fo r them and for all the world, which is divided into deux parts, on the one hand bad personnes and on the other hand people who try to live, and fighting to survive. Help us!

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Lause 1
    • Hi all, Have you ever been afraid of something which pass off long away of your home, for example: War, bad gays, murder...
      Äänestä nyt!
    • Hi alleverybody,¶Have you ever been afraid of something which pass off longfar away ofrom your home, for example: War, bad gays, murder...
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 1
  • Lause 2
    • I live on my own, and far away of my cuntry, but when i watch TV, read news papers or browse on facebook, twitter and so, and see what happen at home, i'am affraid for my familly, my littles brothers, dad and mom.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • I live on my own, and far away ofrom my country, but when i watch TV, read news papers or browse on facebook, twitter and so, and see what happen at home, i' am affraid for my familly, my littles brothers, dad and mom.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2
  • Lause 3
    • But in these moments i praylike a crazy boy God to protect them until i finish my PhD study and find a job to bring them in a other place.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • But in these moments i pray God like a crazy boy God to protect them until i finish my PhD study and find a job to bring them in a other place.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3
  • Lause 4
    • Everyday i pray fo r them and for all the world, which is divided into deux parts, on the one hand bad personnes and on the other hand people who try to live, and fighting to survive. Help us!
      Äänestä nyt!
    • Everyday i pray fo r them and for all the world, which is divided into deuxtwo parts,: on the one hand bad personnesople and on the other hand people who try to live, and fightstruggling to survive. Help us!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4