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    • why not be afaraid

    • Hi all, Have you ever been afraid of something which pass off long away of your home, for example: War, bad gays, murder...
    • I live on my own, and far away of my cuntry, but when i watch TV, read news papers or browse on facebook, twitter and so, and see what happen at home, i'am affraid for my familly, my littles brothers, dad and mom.
    • But in these moments i praylike a crazy boy God to protect them until i finish my PhD study and find a job to bring them in a other place.
    • Everyday i pray fo r them and for all the world, which is divided into deux parts, on the one hand bad personnes and on the other hand people who try to live, and fighting to survive. Help us!

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    • I live on my own, and far away of my cuntry, but when i watch TV, read news papers or browse on facebook, twitter and so, and see what happen at home, i'am affraid for my familly, my littles brothers, dad and mom.
      Jetzt abstimmen!
    • I live on my own, and far away ofrom my country, but when i watch TV, read news papers or browse on facebook, twitter and so, and see what happen at home, i' am affraid for my familly, my littles brothers, dad and mom.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2
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    • Everyday i pray fo r them and for all the world, which is divided into deux parts, on the one hand bad personnes and on the other hand people who try to live, and fighting to survive. Help us!
      Jetzt abstimmen!
    • Everyday i pray fo r them and for all the world, which is divided into deuxtwo parts,: on the one hand bad personnesople and on the other hand people who try to live, and fightstruggling to survive. Help us!
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 4Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 4