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    • 3 introductions.

  • 1.
    • I think learning material in school is responsibility of students and not of teachers.
    • Unfortunately, the majority of parents think the failure in kid's learning is due to uncompetetive teachers.
    • But teachers'job is to clarify and explain different topics about a subject, while students participate actively in class for understanding and learning new concepts. 2.
    • The majority of the time material on the internet is inadequate, and I think it should be controlled to protect the public.
    • It is not a secret the internet is the new tool for people researching, and the kids are not mature enough for filtering true information or processing explicit sexual content.
    • For this reason, parents and schools are called for developing strategies to control controversial data on the internet. 3.
    • Currently, colleges and universities are losing the labor of being a place for connecting people and developing social strategies.People need more spaces for arguing ideas face to face and having real contact with the human feelings.
    • For that, I disagree that colleges and universities offer more distance learning courses.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
    • I think learning material in school is responsibility of students and not of teachers.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I think learning material in school is responsibility of studentthat students being able to learn depends on the school materials and not ofn the teachers.
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  • câu 3
    • Unfortunately, the majority of parents think the failure in kid's learning is due to uncompetetive teachers.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Unfortunately, the majority of parents think the failure in kid'sat a kid not being able to learning is due to uncompetetive teachers.
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  • câu 4
    • But teachers'job is to clarify and explain different topics about a subject, while students participate actively in class for understanding and learning new concepts. 2.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • But a teachers's job is to clarify and explain different topics about a subject, while students participate actively in class forin order to understanding and learning new concepts. 2.
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  • câu 5
    • The majority of the time material on the internet is inadequate, and I think it should be controlled to protect the public.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 2. The majority of the time, material on the internet is inadequate, and I think that it should be controlled to protect the public.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • It is not a secret the internet is the new tool for people researching, and the kids are not mature enough for filtering true information or processing explicit sexual content.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It is not a secret that the internet is the new tool for people researching, andhowever the kids are not mature enough for filtering true information nor are they able of processing explicit sexual content.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • For this reason, parents and schools are called for developing strategies to control controversial data on the internet. 3.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • For this reason, parents and schools are called forshould work together in order to developing strategies to control controversial data on the internet. 3.
      JaazzJaazz profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • Currently, colleges and universities are losing the labor of being a place for connecting people and developing social strategies.People need more spaces for arguing ideas face to face and having real contact with the human feelings.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 3. Currently, colleges and universities are losing the laborrole of being a place for connecting people and developing social strategies. People need more spaces for arguing ideas face to face and having real contact with the human feelings.
      JaazzJaazz profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9