Korrekturen

Text von EDMOLHE - English

    • 3 introductions.

  • 1.
    • I think learning material in school is responsibility of students and not of teachers.
    • Unfortunately, the majority of parents think the failure in kid's learning is due to uncompetetive teachers.
    • But teachers'job is to clarify and explain different topics about a subject, while students participate actively in class for understanding and learning new concepts. 2.
    • The majority of the time material on the internet is inadequate, and I think it should be controlled to protect the public.
    • It is not a secret the internet is the new tool for people researching, and the kids are not mature enough for filtering true information or processing explicit sexual content.
    • For this reason, parents and schools are called for developing strategies to control controversial data on the internet. 3.
    • Currently, colleges and universities are losing the labor of being a place for connecting people and developing social strategies.People need more spaces for arguing ideas face to face and having real contact with the human feelings.
    • For that, I disagree that colleges and universities offer more distance learning courses.

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  • Satz 4
    • But teachers'job is to clarify and explain different topics about a subject, while students participate actively in class for understanding and learning new concepts. 2.
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    • But a teachers's job is to clarify and explain different topics about a subject, while students participate actively in class forin order to understanding and learning new concepts. 2.
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  • Satz 5
    • The majority of the time material on the internet is inadequate, and I think it should be controlled to protect the public.
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    • 2. The majority of the time, material on the internet is inadequate, and I think that it should be controlled to protect the public.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 5Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 5
  • Satz 6
    • It is not a secret the internet is the new tool for people researching, and the kids are not mature enough for filtering true information or processing explicit sexual content.
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    • It is not a secret that the internet is the new tool for people researching, andhowever the kids are not mature enough for filtering true information nor are they able of processing explicit sexual content.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 6Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 6
  • Satz 7
    • For this reason, parents and schools are called for developing strategies to control controversial data on the internet. 3.
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    • For this reason, parents and schools are called forshould work together in order to developing strategies to control controversial data on the internet. 3.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 7Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 7
  • Satz 8
    • Currently, colleges and universities are losing the labor of being a place for connecting people and developing social strategies.People need more spaces for arguing ideas face to face and having real contact with the human feelings.
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    • 3. Currently, colleges and universities are losing the laborrole of being a place for connecting people and developing social strategies. People need more spaces for arguing ideas face to face and having real contact with the human feelings.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 8Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 8
  • Satz 9