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  • For-and-against essay

    • Statement: Classmates made best friends for life; Essay: School is the best time in child's life.
  • It's amazing period when child meets a wide range of people and gets acquainted with interests of his/her peers and classmates.
  • But the question arises: will this relationship last as a friendship for entire life of children?
  • Personally, I believe that classmates could make friends for a lifetime.
  • Usually, it happens for two reasons: firstly, 50% of childhood, children spend at school, and the most part of time they are among their classmates.
  • Therefore, joint occupations unite people and develop a friendship.
  • Secondly, the things that children have in common as school subjects, interests, social circle also contribute to the development of friendly relations.
  • However, some people might argue with my ideas.
  • They think that after graduation, the paths of life of children will be splitted, and the friendship will not be exist anymore, they will lose the connection between one another.
  • Nevertheless, I cannot agree with above-mentioned opinion.
  • I'm still sure that nothing can break a real friendship, because even if ex-classmates will be divided by graduation, they still could maintain relations by phone calling, chatting via the Internet, or, occasionally, meet, for instance, at a cafe.
  • All in all, despite the skepticism by some people, I'm strongly convinced that classmates could make best friends for life.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • It's amazing period when child meets a wide range of people and gets acquainted with interests of his/her peers and classmates.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 2PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 2
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    • Usually, it happens for two reasons: firstly, 50% of childhood, children spend at school, and the most part of time they are among their classmates.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 5PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 5
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    • Secondly, the things that children have in common as school subjects, interests, social circle also contribute to the development of friendly relations.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 7PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 7
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    • They think that after graduation, the paths of life of children will be splitted, and the friendship will not be exist anymore, they will lose the connection between one another.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 9PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 9
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    • I'm still sure that nothing can break a real friendship, because even if ex-classmates will be divided by graduation, they still could maintain relations by phone calling, chatting via the Internet, or, occasionally, meet, for instance, at a cafe.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 11PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 11
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    • All in all, despite the skepticism by some people, I'm strongly convinced that classmates could make best friends for life.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 12PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 12