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Ana_wise'den mesaj - English

  • For-and-against essay

    • Statement: Classmates made best friends for life; Essay: School is the best time in child's life.
  • It's amazing period when child meets a wide range of people and gets acquainted with interests of his/her peers and classmates.
  • But the question arises: will this relationship last as a friendship for entire life of children?
  • Personally, I believe that classmates could make friends for a lifetime.
  • Usually, it happens for two reasons: firstly, 50% of childhood, children spend at school, and the most part of time they are among their classmates.
  • Therefore, joint occupations unite people and develop a friendship.
  • Secondly, the things that children have in common as school subjects, interests, social circle also contribute to the development of friendly relations.
  • However, some people might argue with my ideas.
  • They think that after graduation, the paths of life of children will be splitted, and the friendship will not be exist anymore, they will lose the connection between one another.
  • Nevertheless, I cannot agree with above-mentioned opinion.
  • I'm still sure that nothing can break a real friendship, because even if ex-classmates will be divided by graduation, they still could maintain relations by phone calling, chatting via the Internet, or, occasionally, meet, for instance, at a cafe.
  • All in all, despite the skepticism by some people, I'm strongly convinced that classmates could make best friends for life.

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