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Text from Ana_wise - English

  • For-and-against essay

    • Statement: Classmates made best friends for life; Essay: School is the best time in child's life.
  • It's amazing period when child meets a wide range of people and gets acquainted with interests of his/her peers and classmates.
  • But the question arises: will this relationship last as a friendship for entire life of children?
  • Personally, I believe that classmates could make friends for a lifetime.
  • Usually, it happens for two reasons: firstly, 50% of childhood, children spend at school, and the most part of time they are among their classmates.
  • Therefore, joint occupations unite people and develop a friendship.
  • Secondly, the things that children have in common as school subjects, interests, social circle also contribute to the development of friendly relations.
  • However, some people might argue with my ideas.
  • They think that after graduation, the paths of life of children will be splitted, and the friendship will not be exist anymore, they will lose the connection between one another.
  • Nevertheless, I cannot agree with above-mentioned opinion.
  • I'm still sure that nothing can break a real friendship, because even if ex-classmates will be divided by graduation, they still could maintain relations by phone calling, chatting via the Internet, or, occasionally, meet, for instance, at a cafe.
  • All in all, despite the skepticism by some people, I'm strongly convinced that classmates could make best friends for life.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
    • It's amazing period when child meets a wide range of people and gets acquainted with interests of his/her peers and classmates.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • Usually, it happens for two reasons: firstly, 50% of childhood, children spend at school, and the most part of time they are among their classmates.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
    • Secondly, the things that children have in common as school subjects, interests, social circle also contribute to the development of friendly relations.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
    • They think that after graduation, the paths of life of children will be splitted, and the friendship will not be exist anymore, they will lose the connection between one another.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10
  • Zdanie 11
    • I'm still sure that nothing can break a real friendship, because even if ex-classmates will be divided by graduation, they still could maintain relations by phone calling, chatting via the Internet, or, occasionally, meet, for instance, at a cafe.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11
  • Zdanie 12
    • All in all, despite the skepticism by some people, I'm strongly convinced that classmates could make best friends for life.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12