Korreksies

HELP NOU OM TE KORRIGEER!reggestel

Text from Manonsrz - English

    • The influence of Internet on our way of life

    • To begin with, I would like to point out that today, there is an enthusiasm for sport and for healthy way of life.
    • Indeed, all in life remembers us that physical activity is essential : ads, prevention campaign, social networks...
    • The internet impacts the way that we eat because on Instagram for instance, plenty of influencers says what they eat - especially if it's healthy – and oblige ourselves to improve our diet.
    • It could be a good thing for health but this influence could become harmful too : some young girls fall in anorexia because they are taken in a vicious circle without making the difference between a healthy food and a drastic diet.
    • So, it would be necessary to control more and more the utilisation of Internet, or at least to invest in education with new courses about the Internet's risks.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Titel
  • Sentence 1
  • Sentence 2
  • Sentence 3
    • The internet impacts the way that we eat because on Instagram for instance, plenty of influencers says what they eat - especially if it's healthy – and oblige ourselves to improve our diet.
      Stem nou!
    • The internet impacts the way that we eat because on Instagram for instance,. Take for instance, on Instagram; plenty of influencers says what they eat - especially if it's healthy – and oblige ourselves toin improveing our diet.
      JOHNSON5252JOHNSON5252 profile picture Opmerkings
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 3VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 3
  • Sentence 4
    • It could be a good thing for health but this influence could become harmful too : some young girls fall in anorexia because they are taken in a vicious circle without making the difference between a healthy food and a drastic diet.
      Stem nou!
    • It could be a good thing for health but thisese influences could become harmful too : s. Some young girls faell in anorexia because they are taken in a vicious circle without making the differences between a healthy foods and a drastic diet.s.
      JOHNSON5252JOHNSON5252 profile picture Opmerkings
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 4VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 4
  • Sentence 5
    • So, it would be necessary to control more and more the utilisation of Internet, or at least to invest in education with new courses about the Internet's risks.
      Stem nou!
    • So, it would beIn conclusion, it is necessary to control more and more thexcessive utiliszation of Internet (internet addiction), or at least to invest in education with new courses about the Internet's risks.
      JOHNSON5252JOHNSON5252 profile picture Opmerkings
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 5VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 5