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  • Homework about a text in Psychology

    • Question : What other information would you have liked to find ?
    • - I would have liked finding in this text, some informations about working conditions, for instance if this work is exhausting or not.
    • Moreover, I would like to find advantages and drawbacks, in fact the author deals with goals and organization of the job but not about the positive or negative points.
    • The author could have talked about what he likes or dislikes especially in this work.
    • Finally, Amanda the author, could deals with her studies to access at this job and her eventual advices for people who would like to follow her career's example.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Lause 1
  • Lause 2
    • - I would have liked finding in this text, some informations about working conditions, for instance if this work is exhausting or not.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • - I would have liked to finding in this text, some new informations about working conditions, for instance if this type work is exhausting or not.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2
  • Lause 3
    • Moreover, I would like to find advantages and drawbacks, in fact the author deals with goals and organization of the job but not about the positive or negative points.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • Moreover, I would like to find advantages and drawbacks, in fact the author deals with the goals and organization of the job but not about theit's positive or negative points.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3
  • Lause 4
  • Lause 5
    • Finally, Amanda the author, could deals with her studies to access at this job and her eventual advices for people who would like to follow her career's example.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • Finally, Amanda the author, could deals with her studies to access at this job and her eventual advices for people who would like to follow her career's example. ¶
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5