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  • Homework about a text in Psychology

    • Question : What other information would you have liked to find ?
    • - I would have liked finding in this text, some informations about working conditions, for instance if this work is exhausting or not.
    • Moreover, I would like to find advantages and drawbacks, in fact the author deals with goals and organization of the job but not about the positive or negative points.
    • The author could have talked about what he likes or dislikes especially in this work.
    • Finally, Amanda the author, could deals with her studies to access at this job and her eventual advices for people who would like to follow her career's example.

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    • - I would have liked finding in this text, some informations about working conditions, for instance if this work is exhausting or not.
      투표하세요!
    • - I would have liked to finding in this text, some new informations about working conditions, for instance if this type work is exhausting or not.
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    • Moreover, I would like to find advantages and drawbacks, in fact the author deals with goals and organization of the job but not about the positive or negative points.
      투표하세요!
    • Moreover, I would like to find advantages and drawbacks, in fact the author deals with the goals and organization of the job but not about theit's positive or negative points.
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    • Finally, Amanda the author, could deals with her studies to access at this job and her eventual advices for people who would like to follow her career's example.
      투표하세요!
    • Finally, Amanda the author, could deals with her studies to access at this job and her eventual advices for people who would like to follow her career's example. ¶
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