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Homework about a text in Psychology

• Question : What other information would you have liked to find ?

• - I would have liked finding in this text, some informations about working conditions, for instance if this work is exhausting or not.

• Moreover, I would like to find advantages and drawbacks, in fact the author deals with goals and organization of the job but not about the positive or negative points.

• The author could have talked about what he likes or dislikes especially in this work.

• Finally, Amanda the author, could deals with her studies to access at this job and her eventual advices for people who would like to follow her career's example.