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    • Taking a Trip -- Tamsui (淡水)

  • Finally, I try to clear my mind and write down everything which was happened in the end of 2017 and in the beginning of this year.
    • My Spanish friend came over me from Taichung since December 30th ,2017 to Junuary 1st ,2018.
  • Besides visiting some tourist attractions in New Taipei City, the most important thing was to watch the fireworks show which was displayed in front of Taipei 101.
    • Though most people have already returned to the peaceful and quiet life after January 1st, even more the Chinese New Year have already past, I am going to recall my memories and share some pictures which I took in remembrance of the nice trip I had with my friend, Sergio.
    • Our first stop was going to the area which Sergio's ancestors occupied about 400 years ago.
    • When I had already getting old and forgot some part of knowledges I leared in high school (even more I was not sure about the right answer of ‘’ Which is the first country that colonied and built a castle in the north of Taiwan , Spain or Netherland?
    • ‘’ ) suprisely, Sergio was more familiar with the history of Taiwan than me and solve my confusion.
    • Actually, Fort San Domingo (淡水紅毛城) was more smaller than I imaged, I thought the castle would big enough to hold the luxurious porm just like the movie ‘’Marie Antoinette’’, however , it just like a house of a subtle ambassador.
    • I didn’t took many photos of this monument, instead, I was more interested in the lively turtles in Aletheia University (真理大學).
    • Skip the Tamsui Old Street (淡水老街), aside from waiting in line for famous food, this is a place which was full of tourist who walk slowly.
    • After eating local snack ‘’Ah Gei (阿給,Oily Bean Curd) '’ symbolically, we left the land and took a advanture on the sea.
  • There are some regulations when I go out with Sergio.
  • First, the weather wouldn't be good.
  • Second, we walked a lot.
    • Third, we always went to some relatively dangerous places which are without a lot of tourist.
  • Fourth, we went hiking.
  • Last, we took a ship almost every time.
    • Those rules will be verify in the following days and our next trip in Hualien (花蓮).
  • Anyway, we left for Lover's Wharf (情人碼頭) by ship from Fisherman's Wharf (漁人碼頭).
    • Despite the dirty and bad smell smoke was pollute from the moving ship whole the way, the journey at sea was more far and more excited than the last time when we took a ferry in Cijin(旗津), Kaohsiung(高雄).
    • We stayed in the deck, felt the strong and salty wind, a few waterdrops splashed on my face, I thought some of them were from the sea, another of them is from the glommy sky.
    • Although the weather was bad, I couldn’t see the view of astonishing sunset as like which I visited Tamsui (淡水) at the first time about two years ago, traveling in the sea and imaged myself as a fearless pirate was areadly make my mind fill with happiness.

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    • Finally, I try to clear my mind and write down everything which was happened in the end of 2017 and in the beginning of this year.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Besides visiting some tourist attractions in New Taipei City, the most important thing was to watch the fireworks show which was displayed in front of Taipei 101.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • Though most people have already returned to the peaceful and quiet life after January 1st, even more the Chinese New Year have already past, I am going to recall my memories and share some pictures which I took in remembrance of the nice trip I had with my friend, Sergio.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • TAlthough most people have already returned to the peaceful and quiet life after January 1st, even more and the Chinese New Year have already past, I a'm going to recall my memories and share some pictures which I took in remembrance of the nice trip I had with my friend, Sergio.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • When I had already getting old and forgot some part of knowledges I leared in high school (even more I was not sure about the right answer of ‘’ Which is the first country that colonied and built a castle in the north of Taiwan , Spain or Netherland?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • When I had already geottingen old and forgotten some part ofof my knowledges I had learned in high school (even more I was non't sure about the right answer of ‘’ Which is the first country that colonied and built a castle in the north of Taiwan , Spain or the Netherland?s?'')
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
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    • ‘’ ) suprisely, Sergio was more familiar with the history of Taiwan than me and solve my confusion.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ‘’ ) sSuprisely, Sergio was more familiar with the history of Taiwan than me and solved my confusion.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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    • Actually, Fort San Domingo (淡水紅毛城) was more smaller than I imaged, I thought the castle would big enough to hold the luxurious porm just like the movie ‘’Marie Antoinette’’, however , it just like a house of a subtle ambassador.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Actually, Fort San Domingo (淡水紅毛城) was more smaller than I had imagined, I thought the castle would be big enough to hold the luxurious porom just like the movie ‘’Marie Antoinette’’, however , it's just like a house of a subtle ambassador.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • I didn’t took many photos of this monument, instead, I was more interested in the lively turtles in Aletheia University (真理大學).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I didn’t tookake many photos of this monument, instead, I was more interested in the lively turtles in Aletheia University (真理大學).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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    • Skip the Tamsui Old Street (淡水老街), aside from waiting in line for famous food, this is a place which was full of tourist who walk slowly.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • SkipWe skipped the Tamsui Old Street (淡水老街), aside from waiting in line for famous food, this is a place which was full of tourists who walk slowly.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
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    • After eating local snack ‘’Ah Gei (阿給,Oily Bean Curd) '’ symbolically, we left the land and took a advanture on the sea.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • After eating a local snack ‘’Ah Gei (阿給,Oily Bean Curd) '’ symbolically, we left the land and took an advanture on the sea.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
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    • Despite the dirty and bad smell smoke was pollute from the moving ship whole the way, the journey at sea was more far and more excited than the last time when we took a ferry in Cijin(旗津), Kaohsiung(高雄).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Despite the dirty and bad smell of smoke wasand polluteion from the moving ship the whole the way, the journey at sea was more fafurther and more exciteding than the last time when we took a ferry in Cijin(旗津), Kaohsiung(高雄).
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 20ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 20
  • câu 21
    • We stayed in the deck, felt the strong and salty wind, a few waterdrops splashed on my face, I thought some of them were from the sea, another of them is from the glommy sky.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • We stayed in the deck, felt the strong and salty wind, a few waterdrops splashed on my face, I thought sSome of them were from the sea, anbut other of them iss were from the glommy sky.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 21ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 21
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    • Although the weather was bad, I couldn’t see the view of astonishing sunset as like which I visited Tamsui (淡水) at the first time about two years ago, traveling in the sea and imaged myself as a fearless pirate was areadly make my mind fill with happiness.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Although the weather was bad, I couldn’t see the view of an astonishing sunset as like whichwhen I visited Tamsui (淡水) at the first time about two years ago,. I traveling in theed by sea and imagined myself as a fearless pirate washo had alreadly makde my mind fill with happiness. ¶
      to be happy.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 22ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 22