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Testo da DebbyK - English

    • Taking a Trip -- Tamsui (淡水)

  • Finally, I try to clear my mind and write down everything which was happened in the end of 2017 and in the beginning of this year.
    • My Spanish friend came over me from Taichung since December 30th ,2017 to Junuary 1st ,2018.
  • Besides visiting some tourist attractions in New Taipei City, the most important thing was to watch the fireworks show which was displayed in front of Taipei 101.
    • Though most people have already returned to the peaceful and quiet life after January 1st, even more the Chinese New Year have already past, I am going to recall my memories and share some pictures which I took in remembrance of the nice trip I had with my friend, Sergio.
    • Our first stop was going to the area which Sergio's ancestors occupied about 400 years ago.
    • When I had already getting old and forgot some part of knowledges I leared in high school (even more I was not sure about the right answer of ‘’ Which is the first country that colonied and built a castle in the north of Taiwan , Spain or Netherland?
    • ‘’ ) suprisely, Sergio was more familiar with the history of Taiwan than me and solve my confusion.
    • Actually, Fort San Domingo (淡水紅毛城) was more smaller than I imaged, I thought the castle would big enough to hold the luxurious porm just like the movie ‘’Marie Antoinette’’, however , it just like a house of a subtle ambassador.
    • I didn’t took many photos of this monument, instead, I was more interested in the lively turtles in Aletheia University (真理大學).
    • Skip the Tamsui Old Street (淡水老街), aside from waiting in line for famous food, this is a place which was full of tourist who walk slowly.
    • After eating local snack ‘’Ah Gei (阿給,Oily Bean Curd) '’ symbolically, we left the land and took a advanture on the sea.
  • There are some regulations when I go out with Sergio.
  • First, the weather wouldn't be good.
  • Second, we walked a lot.
    • Third, we always went to some relatively dangerous places which are without a lot of tourist.
  • Fourth, we went hiking.
  • Last, we took a ship almost every time.
    • Those rules will be verify in the following days and our next trip in Hualien (花蓮).
  • Anyway, we left for Lover's Wharf (情人碼頭) by ship from Fisherman's Wharf (漁人碼頭).
    • Despite the dirty and bad smell smoke was pollute from the moving ship whole the way, the journey at sea was more far and more excited than the last time when we took a ferry in Cijin(旗津), Kaohsiung(高雄).
    • We stayed in the deck, felt the strong and salty wind, a few waterdrops splashed on my face, I thought some of them were from the sea, another of them is from the glommy sky.
    • Although the weather was bad, I couldn’t see the view of astonishing sunset as like which I visited Tamsui (淡水) at the first time about two years ago, traveling in the sea and imaged myself as a fearless pirate was areadly make my mind fill with happiness.

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    • Besides visiting some tourist attractions in New Taipei City, the most important thing was to watch the fireworks show which was displayed in front of Taipei 101.
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    • Though most people have already returned to the peaceful and quiet life after January 1st, even more the Chinese New Year have already past, I am going to recall my memories and share some pictures which I took in remembrance of the nice trip I had with my friend, Sergio.
      Vota adesso!
    • TAlthough most people have already returned to the peaceful and quiet life after January 1st, even more and the Chinese New Year have already past, I a'm going to recall my memories and share some pictures which I took in remembrance of the nice trip I had with my friend, Sergio.
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    • When I had already getting old and forgot some part of knowledges I leared in high school (even more I was not sure about the right answer of ‘’ Which is the first country that colonied and built a castle in the north of Taiwan , Spain or Netherland?
      Vota adesso!
    • When I had already geottingen old and forgotten some part ofof my knowledges I had learned in high school (even more I was non't sure about the right answer of ‘’ Which is the first country that colonied and built a castle in the north of Taiwan , Spain or the Netherland?s?'')
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    • Actually, Fort San Domingo (淡水紅毛城) was more smaller than I imaged, I thought the castle would big enough to hold the luxurious porm just like the movie ‘’Marie Antoinette’’, however , it just like a house of a subtle ambassador.
      Vota adesso!
    • Actually, Fort San Domingo (淡水紅毛城) was more smaller than I had imagined, I thought the castle would be big enough to hold the luxurious porom just like the movie ‘’Marie Antoinette’’, however , it's just like a house of a subtle ambassador.
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    • I didn’t took many photos of this monument, instead, I was more interested in the lively turtles in Aletheia University (真理大學).
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    • I didn’t tookake many photos of this monument, instead, I was more interested in the lively turtles in Aletheia University (真理大學).
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    • Skip the Tamsui Old Street (淡水老街), aside from waiting in line for famous food, this is a place which was full of tourist who walk slowly.
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    • SkipWe skipped the Tamsui Old Street (淡水老街), aside from waiting in line for famous food, this is a place which was full of tourists who walk slowly.
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 10AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 10
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    • Despite the dirty and bad smell smoke was pollute from the moving ship whole the way, the journey at sea was more far and more excited than the last time when we took a ferry in Cijin(旗津), Kaohsiung(高雄).
      Vota adesso!
    • Despite the dirty and bad smell of smoke wasand polluteion from the moving ship the whole the way, the journey at sea was more fafurther and more exciteding than the last time when we took a ferry in Cijin(旗津), Kaohsiung(高雄).
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 20AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 20
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    • We stayed in the deck, felt the strong and salty wind, a few waterdrops splashed on my face, I thought some of them were from the sea, another of them is from the glommy sky.
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    • We stayed in the deck, felt the strong and salty wind, a few waterdrops splashed on my face, I thought sSome of them were from the sea, anbut other of them iss were from the glommy sky.
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 21AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 21
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    • Although the weather was bad, I couldn’t see the view of astonishing sunset as like which I visited Tamsui (淡水) at the first time about two years ago, traveling in the sea and imaged myself as a fearless pirate was areadly make my mind fill with happiness.
      Vota adesso!
    • Although the weather was bad, I couldn’t see the view of an astonishing sunset as like whichwhen I visited Tamsui (淡水) at the first time about two years ago,. I traveling in theed by sea and imagined myself as a fearless pirate washo had alreadly makde my mind fill with happiness. ¶
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